Question

修改英语句子！请高手们帮帮忙！真的很急啊！拜托了！跪求

thanks for you trust and i would like to suggest that you should come back. for one thing you will able to look after your parents, for another is easy to your work.
if i were you, i should work on nation of development.the reason is that we're proud of being Chinese.For another reason is your parents need your care.

请高手们过目后修改下好吗？

Answer 1

Thank you for you trust and i would like to suggest that you should come back. For one thing, you will be able to look after your parents, for another thing, it is easy to find a job.(这里估计是说回来找工作方便吧？)
If i were you, i would work in a developing country.The reason is that we're proud of being a Chinese.Another reason is your parents need your care.

Answer 2

首先，按原文给于修改，【】的是错字，紧跟的是改过的；（）是该添加的。
【thanks】Thanks for 【you】 your trust and 【i】 I would like to suggest that you should come back. 【for】For one thing， you will (be) able to look after your parents, for another (it) is easy to your work.
【if i】If I were you, 【i】 I should work on nation of development. 【the】 The reason is that we're proud of being Chinese. For another reason is your parents need your care.

我个人的表达如下：
Thank you for your trust. I think you should come back; then you will be able to look after your parents and also you will find that it is easier to work here.
If I were you, I shall consider to play a part in the development of our country because we’re proud of being Chinese; another reason is that your parents need your loving care.

Answer 3

Thanks for your trust and I would like to suggest that you should come back. For one thing you will be able to look after your parents; for another, it is easy for your work.
If I were you, I would rather work in a developing country.The reason is that we're proud of being Chinese.Another reason is that your parents need your care.

Answer 4

感谢您的信任，我想建议你回来。一件事你可以照顾你的父母，另一个是你的工作很容易。
如果我是你，我应该对国家development.the原因是，我们被Chinese.For另一个原因是你父母需要你的照顾而感到自豪。

Answer 5

Thanks for you trust and I am eagering to suggest that you’d better come back. For one thing that you will be able to look after your parents who wish and need to be taken good care.For another, it is covenient for you to work to make a contribution to the national development as a patriotic Chinese.

Answer 6

thanks for your trust and i would like to suggest that you'd better come back. for one thing you will be able to look after your parents, for another it's easy for your work.

if i were you, i should had worked on developing our country.For one reason is that we're proud of being Chinese.For another reason it's that your parents need your care.

只修改了语病