Question

英语短文改错（自己写的）请大家帮帮忙，急！

Human's creativity is the gift that the God give us. At the beginning of the word "Beauty" was created , it was given a widely mean, be used describe women and men, inner and appearance.
But with the passage of time , some historical reasons make people's think become narrow.Now "Beauty" not only is used describe women, but also only be limited to appearance.
人类的创造力是上帝赐予我们的礼物，在美丽一词被创造之初，它包含了恨广泛的意思，被用来形容女人和男人，内心和外表。
但是随着时间的推移，一些历史原因让人们的思想变得狭隘，现在，美丽不仅只用来形容女人，而且只局限于外表。
A lot of people couldn't understanding the word's really mean. They waste lots of time and money on prick up themselves. That is a big mistake, someday time will take our beautful face away, just one thing could be stay, that is your beautful soul and thinking.
许多人不能正确的认识这个词的真正含义，他们浪费许多时间和金钱在打扮自己上。那是一个很大的错误，总有一天，时间会带走我们美丽的容颜，只有一样东西会被留下，那就是我们美丽的灵魂和思想。
So from now on, please use more time to study how to make yourself become a beautful woman who can withstand the test of time. 所以从现在开始，请多花些时间去学习如何把自己变成一个禁得起岁月考验的美丽女人吧

Answer 1

Human's creativity is the gift that the God give us. At the beginning of the word "Beauty" was created (At the very beginning, right after the word "beaty" was created；我想你表达的是这个词刚刚诞生，不是在诞生过程中的某一时刻；如果你是这个意思的话，改为At the beginning of the moment the word "Beauty" was created,原句有语法错误） it was given a widely(wide) mean(meanning), be(being) used （to) describe women and men, inner and appearance.
But with the passage (pass) of time , some historical reasons make(made) people's think (thought) become (可以删掉become) narrow. Now "Beauty" not only is (is ont only) used (to) describe women, but also only （建议删掉，两个only容易混淆） limited to （on) appearance.
人类的创造力是上帝赐予我们的礼物，在美丽一词被创造之初，它包含了恨广泛的意思，被用来形容女人和男人，内心和外表。
但是随着时间的推移，一些历史原因让人们的思想变得狭隘，现在，美丽不仅只用来形容女人，而且只局限于外表。
A lot of people couldn't understandingthe word's really mean.两种改法,couldn't realise what the word really mean, 或者don't understand the word's real meanning) They waste lots of (a lot of) time and money on prick （dress) up themselves. That is a big mistake, someday time will take our beautful face (appeances 前后呼应 away, （前面是句号，but) just one thing could be (没有be) stay, that(which) is your beautful soul and thinking(thought, 这里更合适用mind).
许多人不能正确的认识这个词的真正含义，他们浪费许多时间和金钱在打扮自己上。那是一个很大的错误，总有一天，时间会带走我们美丽的容颜，只有一样东西会被留下，那就是我们美丽的灵魂和思想。

So from now on, please use（spend) more time to (on) study (studying) how to make yourself become a beautful woman who can withstand the test of time. 所以从现在开始，请多花些时间去学习如何把自己变成一个禁得起岁月考验的美丽女人吧