Question

急~~~~英语改错题

1.We will withdraw the offer if we should not hear to you by the end of this week
2.The earliest shipment is December,we hope that it will be acceptable with you
3.We are prepared to keep the offer open to 25th this month
4.The buyer agrees for a friendly settlement of the dispute
5.We would like to direct your attention to the quality of the goods which is superior from that of other makers
6.Seeing that our tools are enjoying fast sales,we suggest that you must take necessary steps without any delay
7.We agree that you send Art No 100 to substitute of Art No 101 under our order No 123
8.We assure you that the shipment of men's shirts will prove till the satisfaction of your customers
9.In the time, we would ask you to send the replacement to us as soon as possible
10.They have sold forward their whole stock of frozen fish
直接写出需要改的地方，谢谢

Answer 1

1.删掉was
was系be动词为被动语态，不合适
语义不通
2.lot后加of
a
lot
of
为惯用法
3.included改为including
included意思为
包括的
形容词性，including意思为
包括
为介词，结构符合
4.not改为no
此为语感...太简单，反而不会解释...一般not用于句尾吧
5.去掉and
连词重复了
一般句中可和and连用
6.shouted改为shouts
一般现在时单数第三人称...
帮忙评最佳，谢谢

Answer 2

1hear to ---hear from
2 in December
3 We are prepared ---We prepared
4agrees for--agrees with
5 makers--makers'
6去掉must
7去掉to
8 去掉will
9In the time---by the time
10 sold forward--sold out