Question

英语改错。

1.There is a exciting pop music concert on the TV.
2.These football stars are the very popular in whole country.
3.In United States,people attach much importance to words on a thank-you card.
4.We are going to play tennis in an afternoon.

Answer 1

I
had
a
embarrassing
experience
this
evening.I
saw
a
man
standing
at
a
bus
stop
when
I
was
on
my
way
home.Though
I
saw
him
from
behind,I
was
sure
he
was
a
friend
of
mine
that
I
hadn't
seen
for
a
long
time.
I
gave
him
a
tap
at
his
shoulder
with
my
umbrella
and
shouted
to
him
at
the
same
time.
He
turned
round,
completely
taking
by
surprise.
Unfortunately,
he
was
not
my
friend
but
a
complete
stranger.I
was
terribly
embarrassed,for
I
didn't
know
how
to
explain
to
him.I
can
only
say
in
a
low
voice,"I'm
so
sorry,sir."After
that
I
walked
away
as
quickly
as
possibly.
只改了语法错误，语言上的过于中文化就没管了。

Answer 2

Dear
Ms
Smith,
I
am
a
secretary
of
the
City
Student
Union(CSU).
少了a
We
are
organizing
an
art
exhibition
for
high
school
students
in
city.
were改成are
This
will
be
held
on
9th
July
in
the
Exhibition
Hall
of
Beihai.
去掉the和of
More
than
1000
paintings
will
be
on
show,and
high
school
students
from
all
the
eight
districts
will
come
to
the
event.
paining改成paintings
but改成and
As
you
are
very
popularly
with
our
Chinese
high
school
students,we'd
like
to
invite
you
to
the
exhibition.
us改成our
去掉for
We
would
be
grateful
when
you
join
them
that
day.
去掉could
Looking
forward
to
hear
from
you
soon..
hear改成hearing

Answer 3

I
just
came
back
from
Britain
last
week,
I
was
luckily（LUCK）
enough
to
be
one
of
the
students
from
different
country(COUNTRIES)
to
visit
the
UK
from
Feb.16to28.We
paid
a
visit
to
a
good
many
(of去掉)
places,like
London
,Oxford
or
（AND）the
Lake
District,I
learned
much
about
British
culture
and
histoy
in
London,where
was(IS)
my
favorite,I
also
liked(LIKE)
Oxford,
in
which
I
saw
much
more
old
buildings,
The
Lake
District
was
beautiful,but
it
was
(加A)pity
that
it
rained
heavily
when
they(WE)
were
tnere.The
most
excited(EXCITING)
thing
for
me
in
Britain
was
that
I
make(MADE)
a
lot
of
friends
there.
修改部分是括号里面的大写

Answer 4

A
lady
once
wrote
a
long
story.
She
sent
(it)
in
to
a
famous
editor.
After
a
few
(weeks)
the
story
was
returned
back
to
her.
The
lady
was
angry.
She
wrote
back
to
the
editor:
"Dear
Sir,
yesterday
you
sent
back
a
story
of
mine
(How)
do
you
know
that
the
story
is
not
good?
You
didn't
read
it.
(Before)
I
sent
you
the
story,
I
pasted
together
(pages)
18,
19,
and
20.
That
was
a
test
to
see
whether
you
will
read
the
story.
When
the
story
came
back
yesterday,
the
pages
(are)
still
pasted
together.
Is
this
the
way
you
read
all
the
stories
(that)
are
(sent)
to
you?
The
editor
wrote
back
"Dear
Madam,
in
breakfast
When
I
have
an
egg,
I
don't
have
to
eat
the
whole
egg
to
discover
that
it
is
bad.

Answer 5

1.it's+(a)
famous.
2.before变when.
3.them变us
4.time前加the.
5.ex
pensive后的and变but.
6.on去掉
7.tiring改为tired
8.at去掉
9.trip
it
was.我只能知道这么多了，what那里看不到了