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英语短文改错

英语短文改错Music and songs play a important part in our daily life.For example，it can bring us pleasure and make us happy.However，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency.I was fond of listening to songs and music very much，but my favorite song is Country Road.The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved and cared by Grandma.What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow.In a word，once enjoying，the song will never be forgotten.

Music and songs play important part in our daily life. For example, can bring us pleasure and make us happy. ， they can help us improve our study and working efficiency. I fond of listening to songs and music very much, my favorite song is country Road. The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in I am loved and cared 　 by Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young . In a word, once ， the song will never be forgotten.

Answer 1

Music and songs play a(改成an) important part in our daily life. For example，it(改成they) can bring us pleasure and make us happy.However(改成Besides)，they can help us improve our study and working efficiency.I was(改成is) fond of listening to songs and music very much，but(改成and) my favorite song is Country Road.The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that(改成which) I am loved and cared (此处加for) by Grandma.What's more，they make me think of my wonderful childhood was(去掉这个was) spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow(改成fellows).In a word，once enjoying(改成enjoyed)，the song will never be forgotten.

Answer 2

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