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倔强的我们，谁也不愿理会谁
Both of us are perverse and stubborn,
and not willing to compromise with each other

疲惫的心灵需要时间来慰藉
it takes time to cure our weary heart

厌倦的心情需要空间去淡除
and only the distance/space can release our jaded

mood
our weary mood need the space to be recovered

也许我们都累了，都倦了
maybe we become tired, maybe we are

extremely exhausted

不再体谅彼此，不再包容彼此
we no longer understand each other
we no longer tolerate each other

麻木充斥了我们的身体，及至心灵
insensibility/torpor is flooding our bodies and minds

那些原本属于我们的愧疚、心疼、爱护、谅解

...
things like shame, pardon,cherishing,and

understanding that is ever supposed to belong to us

不知飘散在了校园的哪个角落
has fallen into oblivion

消逝在了我们的记忆里
vanished from our memory

多愁的秋，落叶满地，寒风萧萧
autumn has come with cold wind blowing and falling leaf all over the ground,

难道我们的心也随之变得萧条、冷酷？
Is our heart becoming depressed and cold as well?

这是怎样的悲哀，我们的爱去了哪里？
what sort of sad this is ? And where our love has gone?

Answer 1

1:Angela
Zhang
is
my
favourite
singer.She
is
a
beautiful
girl.She
is
a
famous
singer.She
born
in
Taiwan.There
are
five
family
member:her
mother,her
father,her
sister
her
sister
and
she.She
want
to
go
to
Japan.She
like
to
play
volleyball.She
also
like
to
cook,listen
to
music
and
so
on.l
love
Angela
Zhang.
2:You
won't
forget
Angela
Chang
once
you
hear
this
Magic-eye
Baby's
voice.Although
we
came
to
know
Angela
through
the
TV
drama
MVP
lovers
in
2003,Angela
is
now
the
most
promising
diva
in
the
field
of
Mandarin
songs.In
fact,Angela
has
always
insisted
that
she
love
singing
most.
Recently,
her
autobiography
"Miracle
Angela"is
published
in
Mainland
China.Besides
the
exdusive
photos,Angela
also
shared
her
story
to
become
a
modern
Cinderella
with
readers.
In
the
book,
she
wrote
down
her
life
in
Canada
when
she
was
young,the
funny
facts
while
having
dancing
lessons...
No
matter
you
are
a
fan
of
Angela
or
not,
you
can
experience
the
tough
way
to
become
a
star
through
the
book.
Or
maybe
you'll
be
inspired
and
become
a
modern
Cinderella
like
Angela.

Answer 2

Stubborn of us, who do not want to care about who is
Tired and need time to comfort the soul
Tired of feeling the need room to light except
Perhaps we are all tired, all tired
Is no longer understand each other, no longer tolerant to each other
Numb and full of our body, till soul
Who had been part of our guilt, feel bad, love, understanding
I wonder if released into the atmosphere in which corner of the campus
Disappeared in our memories
Duochou autumn, leaves everywhere, and Han Feng Xiaoxiao
Are our hearts are becoming depressed, cold-blooded?
This is the kind of sad, our love gone?