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TakerespecttoyourlifeAstimegoesby,moderntechnologiesdevelopfasterandfaster,andthepres...
Take respect to your life
As time goes by,modern technologies develop faster and faster,and the pressure from study becomes heavier and heavier to every student.Some students cannot bear the pressure so they gradually hate their school life.And some of them even commit suicide just because their failing to pass the final examination.
I feel so sorry for these cases.It is known to all that life is precious,and it is so hard for us to get such an opportunity to come into this world.Nevertheless,those who look down upon their lives just regard them as a game.When facing with a few setbacks,they are unable to be strong but being defeated by difficulties.So eventually they finish their lives rashly,which make all their family members fall into sorrow.
Obviously,it is inadvisable to do so.I think that is just a extreme way to avoid the facts.Everybody cannot avoid facing a myriad of setbacks in his life.When they come into our lives,we must learn to be strong and try our best overcoming them.We should hold on anyway.In a word,take respect to your life,nothing can retrieve it once you have lost it.
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As time goes by,modern technologies develop faster and faster,and the pressure from study becomes heavier and heavier to every student.Some students cannot bear the pressure so they gradually hate their school life.And some of them even commit suicide just because their failing to pass the final examination.
I feel so sorry for these cases.It is known to all that life is precious,and it is so hard for us to get such an opportunity to come into this world.Nevertheless,those who look down upon their lives just regard them as a game.When facing with a few setbacks,they are unable to be strong but being defeated by difficulties.So eventually they finish their lives rashly,which make all their family members fall into sorrow.
Obviously,it is inadvisable to do so.I think that is just a extreme way to avoid the facts.Everybody cannot avoid facing a myriad of setbacks in his life.When they come into our lives,we must learn to be strong and try our best overcoming them.We should hold on anyway.In a word,take respect to your life,nothing can retrieve it once you have lost it.
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括号里的就是改的，基本上没什么错误，写得很不错，继续努力哦
As time goes by,modern technologies develop faster and faster,and the pressure from study becomes heavier and heavier to every student.Some students cannot bear the pressure so they gradually hate their school life.And some of them even commit suicide just because their failing to pass the final examination.
I feel so sorry for these cases.It is known to all that life is precious,and it is so hard for us to get such an opportunity to come into
（the） world.Nevertheless,those who look down upon their lives just regard them as a game.When facing （face是及物动词） a few setbacks,they are unable to be strong （and） being defeated by difficulties.So eventually they finish their lives rashly,which make all their family members fall into sorrow.
Obviously,it is inadvisable to do （that）.I think that is just a extreme way to avoid the facts.Everybody cannot avoid facing a myriad of setbacks in his life.When they come into our lives,we must learn to be strong and try our best （to overcome） them.We should hold on anyway.In a word,take respect to your life,nothing can retrieve it once you have lost it.
As time goes by,modern technologies develop faster and faster,and the pressure from study becomes heavier and heavier to every student.Some students cannot bear the pressure so they gradually hate their school life.And some of them even commit suicide just because their failing to pass the final examination.
I feel so sorry for these cases.It is known to all that life is precious,and it is so hard for us to get such an opportunity to come into
（the） world.Nevertheless,those who look down upon their lives just regard them as a game.When facing （face是及物动词） a few setbacks,they are unable to be strong （and） being defeated by difficulties.So eventually they finish their lives rashly,which make all their family members fall into sorrow.
Obviously,it is inadvisable to do （that）.I think that is just a extreme way to avoid the facts.Everybody cannot avoid facing a myriad of setbacks in his life.When they come into our lives,we must learn to be strong and try our best （to overcome） them.We should hold on anyway.In a word,take respect to your life,nothing can retrieve it once you have lost it.
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