Question

英语演讲稿My Dream

老师要我写一篇，我写了，老师说加点实现梦想的计划什么的，我实在憋不出来了= =大家帮我加点句子吧……
复制的白白，两分也是白送……

My dream is becoming a professional computer programmer.It's a really relaxing job because I don't need to go out.I can just work at home.I was interested in computer when I was a little boy.I used to ask my father,"how can you work on this strange machine?"He explained many times but I just couldn't understand.When I grew older,I began understand how to use it and how useful it was.I've become good at computer.It can do many things for me.For example, I can read news,get informations I need,save files...I'm going to study harder to achive my dream.(就这里加点儿)Though computer science is so difficult for me,I believe it doesn't matter if I work hard enough.I'll hold to my dream and try my best to achive it.
额....1L...学习方面能不能多点儿?
1.2.是我打错了= =

Answer 1

修改：
1.I began (加 to ) understand how to use it.

2.get informations I need (加 and 连接）save files...

3.I'm going to study harder to achive my dream.(就这里加点儿)：I know it is not easy to make my dream come true.If I want to be an excellent computer programmer, I must have a lot of knowledge.Being good at English is also very important. I have made a plan that how I should study better.I am going to read English every morning.I must get good grades in all subjects.
What's more, I should be healthy.So I should take exercise every day.
多的来了。