Question

这句英语语法对吗2012 proved to be the latest boxoffice blockbuster,with a apocalyptic scene

2012 proved to be the latest boxoffice blockbuster,with a apocalyptic scene of the end of Earth,stunned audiences jaw-droppedly.

Thanks,I wrote it.

Answer 1

有点不对，with复合结构放在句子中间不符合习惯用法，而且两个分句之间没有连接词。
改为：with a apocalyptic scene of the end of Earth，2012 proved to be the latest boxoffice blockbuster，stunning audiences jaw-droppedly.
或者：2012 proved to be the latest boxoffice blockbuster. With a apocalyptic scene of the end of Earth,it stunned audiences jaw-droppedly.
前句结构更好点，但是后句更贴合原句意思，供楼主自己选择了~
希望能帮到你O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 2

照搬语法 是不太对
但是 我觉得这是 平常的简语 很常见