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AnInvitationIsmybirthdaysoon.Iwillhaveabirthdayparty.Iwillinvitemyfriends.Itakeaphone...
An Invitation
Is my birthday soon.I will have a birthday party. I will invite my friends.
I take a phone tomy friend.
It's my birthday next Sunday. I will have a party. Would you like to come?
I'd love to. Sall I bring some food?
No. But you can bring some food.
What time is the party?
It starts at nine o'clock. See you next Sunday.
see you.
My Phone is ringing.
Hello. It's XieYi zhen speaking.
Hello,it's Li hong. I want to go in for you party. Can i?
Of course,you can. The party starts at nine o'clock. See you next Sunday.
Thank you,see you. 展开
Is my birthday soon.I will have a birthday party. I will invite my friends.
I take a phone tomy friend.
It's my birthday next Sunday. I will have a party. Would you like to come?
I'd love to. Sall I bring some food?
No. But you can bring some food.
What time is the party?
It starts at nine o'clock. See you next Sunday.
see you.
My Phone is ringing.
Hello. It's XieYi zhen speaking.
Hello,it's Li hong. I want to go in for you party. Can i?
Of course,you can. The party starts at nine o'clock. See you next Sunday.
Thank you,see you. 展开
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1行：xx日期少了。
2行：如果是说“我给我的朋友打了个电话”则是I called my friend.
4行：shall少了个h。
5行：矛盾了，你要他带food还是不要他带？
倒数3行：后面合为一句Could I go to your birthday party?
2行：如果是说“我给我的朋友打了个电话”则是I called my friend.
4行：shall少了个h。
5行：矛盾了，你要他带food还是不要他带？
倒数3行：后面合为一句Could I go to your birthday party?
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