Question

高中英语作文 麻烦高手帮忙改一下错误

麻烦了! 一定要尽可能的改//
也可以就文章内容进行补充或修改!!
总之,文章求尽善尽美..谢谢

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++敬礼!!
Written in the end of summer
Just for today,I will be happy enough to do everything.
First I will strengthn my mind. I will work hard.I will give my power to others. To give is to get.
Second ,I will make sure I am decided. The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubetsof today.
The life as if a play. We are the protagonist. I wish we are all the star on the stage. We are all the bast. NO matter where,no matter when.
When I see the falling leaves,T am sad. I said to myself,"what make them fallen?" Now, I have known the answer to the question. It is time. Sometimes I wish I had never been dead. But it is impossible. I will be a stronger. I will never give up. I will do everythings I can to make my life colourful.
Nothing gone stop us. Written in the end of summer,written in your heart.

Answer 1

Just for today,I'd like to do everything what I can do.
Firstly ,I will strength my mind then work harder.I'd like to give more help to the others,as"To give is better than to receive".

Next,I will make sure what I am decided to do .We can't realize anything unless you know better about today exactly.

All in all,the life is just like a play.We are the protagonist.I wish we are all the stars on the stage.We are all the best for ever.No matter where we are,when we are.

When I saw the falling leaves,I feel so sad.I always asked myself"why did they fall down?"I see it's just because of the time.Sometimes I wish I won't been dead for ever.Although I see it's impossible.I will be stronger and stronger.Never give up.I will do everything so that I can get a colorful life.

Nothing can stop us.Just written at the end of this summer,printed in your heart.

Answer 2

既然你不会写，为何还要勉强自己呢？如果你只是为了答案那你何不放弃学习？