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我小时候最喜爱的一本书是远近闻名的《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著。它是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。
《钢铁是怎样炼成的》一书的主人公保尔•柯察金，是作者以自己对人生的理解和追求，以最真切的感情来塑造的形象，艺术典型，生动地回到了人的一生“为谁活着，怎样活着。”本文作者，能创造如此好的中心人物实在棒极了，一下子就把我的好奇心给引出来了，想知道保尔•柯察金在书中的故事，是不是真的。
《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，告诉了很许多关于保尔•柯察金的事与思想品德. 这本书告诉了我保尔是那个年代里的杰出革命青年的代表，在他身上集中体现了他们的精神风貌和共同特征：他勇于献身，拼命工作；他酷爱学习，如饥似渴；他嫉恶如仇，爱恨分明；他不畏艰难，挑战病魔。他永不言败，顽强生活。他也有缺点和毛病。他也有自知之明，他也有深刻的自我反省，严于解剖自己的精神给我留下难忘的印象。他身上实在有我许多要学习的，我要像他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力，我的意志有点薄弱，动不动就放弃，毅力也不算强，所以一定要跟他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力。我还要学习他，如饥似渴的学习。我现在正在读书的阶段，他都没有多少的时间学习了挤出时间学习。还有他的永不言败，顽强生活，这点不是一般人能做到的，要经历多少的失败。我以前多次失败就放弃，我真不如他。
我最喜爱的一本书《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，它真的是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。

Answer 1

The famous book "How the steel is refined" was one of my favorite novel in my child-hood, which was a book to let people learn how to lit up their lifes. I'd love to read it again if I do have time for sure.
The character of the center person, Pavel Korchagin was creating by the book's writter(author） with his real experience about the ambitions and life understanding, pretty classic artistic. This character was lifely to bringing people to think about the aim of life like "Whom's living for and how to living on?" That was how amazing the writter to created such great character who's actracted me desperately want to find out the story about Pavel and see if it is true.
The master piece of " How the steel is refined" told many ideology and experience about Pavel, which let me learned who is a great reprentation of revolutionary youths in that years, he showed not only the spirits but same features of them such as never hold back for hard working, hunger to draw the knowleges for studying, brave for love, dare to hate, no afraid the difficulties and face to the illness. He never give up (surrender) to show how strong is his life. Of course, he had weakness and he knew. He would do the self-examination seriously when weekness found, so I really impressed when people can face to analysis their weakness like he did. I'm really hungering for learning all the spirits from him. He even seems no time to study but still squeezed a very little time to do it, how ashame I have an oppotunity to be a student? People had to experienced a lot of losing then will learn not to give up but how ashame I gave up so many times when I failed in my life? Expecially when I saw the spirit of never surrender of his.
The master piece of "How the steel is refined" is my favorite book, which was a book to let people learn how to lit up their lifes. I'd love to read it again if I do have time for sure.

《钢铁是怎样炼成的〉的英文译名是“How the steel is refined”是肯定的，只是主角的英文译名我却不是很肯定，楼上的那位翻译的不错，文法很好，不过不太够口语，用在文字写作就真的一流，再上面的那几个就绝对是机译的。另外，你的意思我帮你翻译了，不过当中修改了少许，使之流畅点，请不要介意。希望帮到你

Answer 2

我小时候最喜爱的一本书是远近闻名的《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著。它是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。
When I was young, my most favorite book was ”How the steel is tempered”, a celebrated book well known to all. It was a textbook that could bring you a brilliant life. If I have the time now, I shall properly go over the book again.

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》一书的主人公保尔•柯察金，是作者以自己对人生的理解和追求，以最真切的感情来塑造的形象，艺术典型，生动地回到了人的一生“为谁活着，怎样活着。”本文作者，能创造如此好的中心人物实在棒极了，一下子就把我的好奇心给引出来了，想知道保尔•柯察金在书中的故事，是不是真的。
The protagonist of the book, Pavel Korchagin, was a figure of artistic typicality created by the author with the most heartfelt feelings, basing on his own personal understanding and pursuit of life, vividly returning to one’s lifetime of “For whom and how we live”. It’s fantastic that the author could come up with such a good protagonist, my curiosity was immediately aroused, and I wanted to know whether the story of Pavel Korchagin in the book was real or not.

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，告诉了很许多关于保尔•柯察金的事与思想品德. 这本书告诉了我保尔是那个年代里的杰出革命青年的代表，在他身上集中体现了他们的精神风貌和共同特征：他勇于献身，拼命工作；他酷爱学习，如饥似渴；他嫉恶如仇，爱恨分明；他不畏艰难，挑战病魔。他永不言败，顽强生活。他也有缺点和毛病。他也有自知之明，他也有深刻的自我反省，严于解剖自己的精神给我留下难忘的印象。
This famous book ”How the steel is tempered” tells us a lot about Pavel Korchagin and his
moral ideology. The book shows that Pavel was a representative of the outstanding revolutionary youths of that era, he epitomized their mental outlook and common traits; he dedicated himself to his work, ardently loved to learn, lived on raw emotions, defied difficulties and challenged illness, never gave up and lived unyieldingly. He also had flaws and shortcomings, he was aware of them and performed serious self-criticism, his strict soul-searching spirit had etched an enduring impression on me.

他身上实在有我许多要学习的，我要像他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力，我的意志有点薄弱，动不动就放弃，毅力也不算强，所以一定要跟他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力。我还要学习他，如饥似渴的学习。我现在正在读书的阶段，他都没有多少的时间学习了挤出时间学习。还有他的永不言败，顽强生活，这点不是一般人能做到的，要经历多少的失败。我以前多次失败就放弃，我真不如他。
I have a lot to learn from him, I want to have iron will and indomitable spirit like him; I am a bit weak-willed and give up easily, I do not have a strong perseverance, so I want to have an unswerving spirit just like him. I am now still schooling, so I want to study ardently and diligently like he did, for he could squeeze out time to study from barely no available time at all. And also his never-say-die spirit which was not achieved by every ordinary man as it was built up through the experience of numerous setbacks. I had before given up many times after my failures, I really can’t compare with him.

Answer 3

我小时候最喜爱的一本书是远近闻名的《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著。它是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。
《钢铁是怎样炼成的》一书的主人公保尔•柯察金，是作者以自己对人生的理解和追求，以最真切的感情来塑造的形象，艺术典型，生动地回到了人的一生“为谁活着，怎样活着。”本文作者，能创造如此好的中心人物实在棒极了，一下子就把我的好奇心给引出来了，想知道保尔•柯察金在书中的故事，是不是真的。
《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，告诉了很许多关于保尔•柯察金的事与思想品德. 这本书告诉了我保尔是那个年代里的杰出革命青年的代表，在他身上集中体现了他们的精神风貌和共同特征：他勇于献身，拼命工作；他酷爱学习，如饥似渴；他嫉恶如仇，爱恨分明；他不畏艰难，挑战病魔。他永不言败，顽强生活。他也有缺点和毛病。他也有自知之明，他也有深刻的自我反省，严于解剖自己的精神给我留下难忘的印象。他身上实在有我许多要学习的，我要像他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力，我的意志有点薄弱，动不动就放弃，毅力也不算强，所以一定要跟他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力。我还要学习他，如饥似渴的学习。我现在正在读书的阶段，他都没有多少的时间学习了挤出时间学习。还有他的永不言败，顽强生活，这点不是一般人能做到的，要经历多少的失败。我以前多次失败就放弃，我真不如他。
我最喜爱的一本书《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，它真的是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。
I was a kid favorite book is well known for the "How the Steel Was Tempered" This famous. It is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly.
"How the Steel Was Tempered," a book hero Paul • Korchagin, the author's own understanding of life and the pursuit of the most vivid feelings to shape the image of the typical art vividly back to the person's life "for whom is alive and how to live." The author can create such a good central figure is really great, my curiosity at once given leads to, and would like to know Paul • Korchagin the story in the book It is not true.
"How the Steel Was Tempered" This masterpiece, tell a very lot about Paul • Korchagin to do with ideology and moral character. This book told me that Paul is the era of the outstanding representatives of revolutionary youth, in his who embodied their spirit and common characteristics: courageous dedication, hard work; He loves learning, thirst; he Jiwuruchou, both good and clear; he was not afraid of difficult and challenging illness. He never give up, tenacious of life. He also has shortcomings. He also has self-knowledge, he also has a deep self-reflection, is strict with its own spiritual anatomy left me an unforgettable impression. He found me a lot to learn indeed, and I want to like him have an iron will and perseverance, I will a bit weak, and apt to give up, persistence is not too strong, so it must be the same with him there is an iron will and perseverance. I would also like to learn from him, hungry to learn. I am now reading the stage, he does not have much time to learn the extrusion time to learn. There he never give up, tenacious life, this is not ordinary people can do, to go through the number of failures. I've failed so many times to give up, I am really not as good as him.
One of my favorite book "How the Steel Was Tempered" This masterpiece, it really is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly.
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Answer 4

我小时候最喜爱的一本书是远近闻名的《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著。它是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。

When I was a child I favorite book is famed "steel is you this classic. It is a splendid life textbooks. If you have time now, I must be carefully read it again.

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》一书的主人公保尔•柯察金，是作者以自己对人生的理解和追求，以最真切的感情来塑造的形象，艺术典型，生动地回到了人的一生“为谁活着，怎样活着。”本文作者，能创造如此好的中心人物实在棒极了，一下子就把我的好奇心给引出来了，想知道保尔•柯察金在书中的故事，是不是真的。

"How the steel was tempered" heroine, Paul, is the author was in their pursuit of life, with the understanding and the most sincere feelings to image and artistic, vividly back to life "for who live, how to live." The author, can create such a good center was fantastic, suddenly my curiosity to derivation, want to know, Paul was in the story, gold is true.

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，告诉了很许多关于保尔•柯察金的事与思想品德. 这本书告诉了我保尔是那个年代里的杰出革命青年的代表，在他身上集中体现了他们的精神风貌和共同特征：他勇于献身，拼命工作；他酷爱学习，如饥似渴；他嫉恶如仇，爱恨分明；他不畏艰难，挑战病魔。他永不言败，顽强生活。他也有缺点和毛病。他也有自知之明，他也有深刻的自我反省，严于解剖自己的精神给我留下难忘的印象。他身上实在有我许多要学习的，我要像他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力，我的意志有点薄弱，动不动就放弃，毅力也不算强，所以一定要跟他一样有钢铁般的意志和毅力。我还要学习他，如饥似渴的学习。我现在正在读书的阶段，他都没有多少的时间学习了挤出时间学习。还有他的永不言败，顽强生活，这点不是一般人能做到的，要经历多少的失败。我以前多次失败就放弃，我真不如他。

What is the iron tempered "the classics, tell a lot about Paul, till golden and moral. This book tells me that time is Paul outstanding revolutionary youth representative, in him embodies the spirit of their common characteristic and courage: he devoted, hard work, He is fond of learning, hungry, He JiERuQiu love, hate trenchant, He challenged the horns, and disease. His dogged never-say-die, life. He has faults and fault. He also have self-knowledge, he also has profound self-examination, strict in anatomic yourself mentally leave me unforgettable impression. He has many verily I will learn to like him, I have iron will and perseverance, I will give up easily, a bit weak, perseverance is not strong, so must with him have iron will and perseverance. I have to study, hungry learning. I'm now studying stage, he had little time to study out time to study. And he's never-say-die, tenacious life, it is not the average person can do, how should fail. I failed many times before, I'm not abandon him.

我最喜爱的一本书《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部名著，它真的是一部灿烂人生的教科书。如果现在有时间，我一定会好好地再读一遍。

My favorite book "steel is you this classic, it really is a splendid life textbooks. If you have time now, I must be carefully read it again.

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Answer 5

I was a kid favorite book is well known for the "How the Steel Was Tempered" This famous. It is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly. "How the Steel Was Tempered" a book hero Paul • Korchagin, the author's own understanding of life and the pursuit of the most vivid feelings to shape the image of the typical art vividly back to the person's life "for whom is alive and how to live." The author can create such a good central figure is really great, my curiosity at once given leads to, and would like to know Paul • Korchagin the story in the book It is not true. "How the Steel Was Tempered"This masterpiece, tell a very lot about Paul • Korchagin to do with ideology and moral character. This book told me that Paul is the era of the outstanding representatives of revolutionary youth, in his who embodied their spirit and common characteristics: courageous dedication, hard work; He loves learning, thirst; he Jiwuruchou, both good and clear; he was not afraid of difficult and challenging illness. He never give up, tenacious of life. He also has shortcomings. He also has self-knowledge, he also has a deep self-reflection, is strict with its own spiritual anatomy left me an unforgettable impression. He found me a lot to learn indeed, and I want to like him have an iron will and perseverance, I will a bit weak, and apt to give up, persistence is not too strong, so it must be the same with him there is an iron will and perseverance. I would also like to learn from him, hungry to learn. I am now reading the stage, he does not have much time to learn the extrusion time to learn. There he never give up, tenacious life, this is not ordinary people can do, to go through the number of failures. I've failed so many times to give up, I am really not as good as him. One of my favorite book"How the Steel Was Tempered"This masterpiece, it really is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly.
或者 你也可以这样翻译:
I was a kid favorite book is well known for the "How the Steel Was Tempered" This famous. It is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly.
"How the Steel Was Tempered," a book hero Paul • Korchagin, the author's own understanding of life and the pursuit of the most vivid feelings to shape the image of the typical art vividly back to the person's life "for whom is alive and how to live." The author can create such a good central figure is really great, my curiosity at once given leads to, and would like to know Paul • Korchagin the story in the book It is not true.
"How the Steel Was Tempered" This masterpiece, tell a very lot about Paul • Korchagin to do with ideology and moral character. This book told me that Paul is the era of the outstanding representatives of revolutionary youth, in his who embodied their spirit and common characteristics: courageous dedication, hard work; He loves learning, thirst; he Jiwuruchou, both good and clear; he was not afraid of difficult and challenging illness. He never give up, tenacious of life. He also has shortcomings. He also has self-knowledge, he also has a deep self-reflection, is strict with its own spiritual anatomy left me an unforgettable impression. He found me a lot to learn indeed, and I want to like him have an iron will and perseverance, I will a bit weak, and apt to give up, persistence is not too strong, so it must be the same with him there is an iron will and perseverance. I would also like to learn from him, hungry to learn. I am now reading the stage, he does not have much time to learn the extrusion time to learn. There he never give up, tenacious life, this is not ordinary people can do, to go through the number of failures. I've failed so many times to give up, I am really not as good as him.
One of my favorite book "How the Steel Was Tempered" This masterpiece, it really is a brilliant life, textbooks. If the current time, I will certainly read it again properly.

或者
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