求这篇英语作文 绝对好评 谢谢
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1.You should listen the teacher in the class more carefully.
2.You should brush up everyday.
3.You should make your mother to be the supervisor to look after you.
4.You should watch TV or play the computer game after you finish your homework.
5.You should bring your homework to school every day.
I hope you will be hand in your homework ontime.And then you will become a good student in one day.
your teacher
1.You should listen the teacher in the class more carefully.
2.You should brush up everyday.
3.You should make your mother to be the supervisor to look after you.
4.You should watch TV or play the computer game after you finish your homework.
5.You should bring your homework to school every day.
I hope you will be hand in your homework ontime.And then you will become a good student in one day.
your teacher
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作文的开头是用he..
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嗯，你吧第一条建议的you should去掉，其他的2345一次换成He should就行了。呵呵想让你自己动手改一下的，没想到你要现成的，注意自己动手学习哦
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