Question

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One day,I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rang.I went to answer immediately.She was my close friend,Lisa.When we were talking on a phone,the fire alarm sounded.I ran back to the kitchen.The room full of smoke and beef was badly burnt.I quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows,and then went out of the house.With my surprise,two fire engine were outside my house.I was rather worried.I told about the fireman that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavt smoke.

Answer 1

One day,I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rang.I went to answer it immediately.It was my close friend,Lisa.When we were talking on the phone,the fire alarm sounded.I ran back to the kitchen.The room was full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt.I quickly turned off the gas,opened all the windows,and then went out of the house.To my surprise,the two fire engines were outside my house.I was rather worried.I told the fireman that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavt smoke.