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阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。An increasing number of students fall in love a

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。An increasing number of students fall in love at an early age and create problems with their studies, which has aroused the school’s attention. A middle school has set a "distance for civilized communication" between boy and girl students. Boys and girls should keep a distance of at least 50 centimeters when they talk in public, otherwise they will be criticized or get an even severer punishment, says an article in Beijing News. It seems that the school has passed the school regulation to prevent girls and boys from falling in love at an early age and creating problems for the school authorities. Some teachers and parents approve of the regulation because it is of vital importance to the teenagers’ study. However, many experts say the problem, if it is one, can be better solved through communication.It is natural for a teenager to have a feeling of love on someone from the opposite sex. It is natural for girls and boys to be attracted to each other as they mature sexually.In fact, normal communication between boy and girl students is good not only for their emotional development and personality refinement, but also for their relationship when they grow up.[写作内容]1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2．以约120个词描述“文明交往距离规定”的利弊，并谈谈你对异性交往的看法。[写作要求]1．作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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From the article, we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age, which has caused different opinions.（33 words） In our daily school life some students can’t resist the opposite gender’s attraction，disturbing themselves. With such a school rule carried out, it’s of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication. Meanwhile, however, it’s not good for the students’ emotional development and normal relationship. Personally, I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender. I’ll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls, but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary. It’s of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love.

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。 【亮点说明】概括部分语言简洁，也概括了重点：From the article, we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age, which has caused different opinions.（33 words）正文观点明确，有理有据，不乏好的短语和句子： With such a school rule carried out, it’s of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication. 这句话用了with复合结构和it做形式主语的句型。. I’ll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls, but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary. 这句话用了让步状语从句，It’s of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love. 这句话也用了it做形式主语。还有范文还使用了 Meanwhile, however, Personally,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。