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Iamaseniorschoolstudent.Ilikemakingthefriendswithpeoplearoundmeanddomybesttogetongood... I am a senior school student. I like making the friends with people around me and do my best to get on good with everyone. But last Sunday I find that one of my friends kept a diary, said that she didn't like me at all and that she didn't want to be your friend any longer. And recently she has started playing a trick on me though I'm a little bit fat. I'm still very kind to her but why can't she be friend to me as before? As with losing weight, should I take more exercise from now on? Use pills? Or do you know any others ways? Please give me any of your advice on this matter. 十处 至少有个是对的,帮帮忙,谢谢啦! 展开
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I am a senior school student. I like making (去掉the) friends with people around me and do my best to get on (well) with everyone. But last Sunday I (found) that one of my friends kept a diary, (saying) that she didn't like me at all and that she didn't want to be (my) friend any longer. And recently she has started playing a trick on me (because) I'm a little bit fat. I'm still very kind to her but why can't she be (friendly) to me as before? As (to/for) losing weight, should I take more exercise from now on? Use pills? Or do you know any (other) ways? Please give me (some) of your advice on this matter.

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making the friends 去掉 the

do my best --doing my best...

get on good with ----get well with

I find ---I found

I find that one of my friends kept a diary, said that she didn't like me at all---I found that one of my friend's diaries said that she didn't like me at all ...
your friend ----my friend
be friend to ---be friendly to me
AS with ----As to / To lose weight
Use pills---Shall I have any pills ?
Or do you know any others ways?---Do you know other ways?
any of your advice ------some advice
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No wonder she is popular with the students she has taught them
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