Question

请帮忙修改一下英语作文，谢谢

This picture shows a cellphone on a pair of hands.The cellphone is commented not the original edition.That means many people steal others technolege and produce products not the original edition.They sell those cellphone at low price in market ,so that bring a lot of loss to the original edition company who has the right of the products .
This phenomenon is very common. Government has made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks this phenomenon is till alive . I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will stop this bad phenomenon too. Let us respect others's brain hard work ,and let us make a harmonius society like a warm family .

图为一双手捧着一部手机，但是旁边写着 山寨 的字样。 让写一篇作文。
请高人帮忙看看，修改一下我的作文。多提宝贵意见。谢谢。

Answer 1

This picture shows a cellphone on a pair of hands.The cellphone is commented TO BE not the original edition.That means many people steal others' technoleDge and produce products WHICH ARE not the original edition.They sell those cellphoneS at low priceS in THE market ,AND THIS bringS a lot of loss IN BOTH CUSTOMERS AND INCOME to the original edition company who has the right of PRODUCING the products .
This phenomenon is very common. THE government haD made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks LIKE this phenomenon is Still aCTIve . I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will TRY TO stop this bad phenomenon too. Let us respect others's brain, KNOWLEDGE AND hard work ,and let us make a harmonius society like a warm family .

Answer 2

This picture shows a cell phone on a pair of hands. The cell phone is commented not the original edition. That means many people steal others technology and produce products not the original edition. They sell those cell phones at low price in market, so that bring a lot of loss to the original edition company who has the right of the product.
This phenomenon is very common. Government has made many policies to stop this kind of phenomenon before. But it looks this phenomenon is still flourish. I hope not only our government but also everyone of our society will stop this bad phenomenon as well. Let us respect other's intellectual property rights, and let us make a harmonious society like a warm family.
我用word检查了一下 修改后 应该没有错误了 写作文用word写会报错的 你作文问题不是很大 问题在于你的单词拼写上面有错！多注意单词的写法 不要知道是什么 但是拼写的时候出错就不值得了