Question

改错！！！英语改错

I was a high school student then,from low income family.So I have to work to support my family.My first one job was to clean
the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there carly and felt anxious about the new world.I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job .At night,I
was sometimes very tired to do my homework.And I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.and that knoledges could change my life.So what I learned from the job,in a
hard way,was much more important as what I earned.

Answer 1

1.“我来自一个家庭”，由翻译可知，在low的前面加a;
2.把I have to work的have改成had，全文时态为一般过去时;
3.删掉one，first和one语义重复;
4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样，做remember的宾语，要用动名词的形式；
5.把harder改成hard，原句没有比较的意味，所以用原形；
6.把very tired的very改成too，因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要，所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”；
7.把understand that的that改成it，只有it可以做形式宾语，真正的宾语为to earn money；
8.knowledges改成knowledge，knowledge是抽象名词，不可数；
9.把as改成than，more...than...表示比较。

Answer 2

1.“我来自一个家庭”，由翻译可知，在low的前面加a;
2.把I have to work的have改成had，全文时态为一般过去时;
3.删掉one，first和one语义重复;
4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样，做remember的宾语，要用动名词的形式；
5.把harder改成hard，原句没有比较的意味，所以用原形；
6.把very tired的very改成too，因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要，所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”；
7.把understand that的that改成it，只有it可以做形式宾语，真正的宾语为to earn money；
8.knowledges改成knowledge，knowledge是抽象名词，不可数；
9.把as改成than，more...than...表示比较。
my first job 不是 first one
后面tense有问题
worked hard。。。== ==

Answer 3

my first job 不是 first one
后面tense有问题
worked hard。。。== ==