关于弊端的雅思写作
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雅思写作谈谈科技发展的利弊
由于科技发展进步，这部分话题也成了雅思写作的高频话题之一，往往要求考生探讨科技进步所带来的好处和影响，大多都是比较贴近生活的，所以考生可以从身边挖掘写作素材。环球 教育 老师就以一篇 范文 为例，浅谈此类 文章 的应对策略。
题目：
people today can perform the everyday tasks as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole?
分析：
题目的大意是指，如今人们购物、银行甚至商业交易都可以通过网络进行，而不需要面对面的交流。这种现象的发生，对于我们个人和社会整体而言有什么影响?其实这个题目与我们日常生活十分相关，如今网上购物、网银交易，甚至是支付水电煤都可以网上进行，这对于我们的生活带来了很大的方便，但是不可否认的是，也会出现一些问题。客观的讨论是必不可少的。
例文分析：
开头段(不少于3+1句) The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This sweeping trend of going about everyday business in the virtual world has triggered a marked decline in face-to-face contact between people . Thus it is essential that we identify the implication of this trend on both individuals and society as a whole.
英文里表达“从事”一件事情 go about / conduct /perform 表示影响可以替换的单词:Implication/ repercussions, impact, influence
主体段1(不少于1+6句) The impact of this phenomenon on individuals is profound. First, Individual efficiency in business transaction and banking will be greatly enhanced. And those who dread shopping are spared the chore of browsing around in shops. Secondly, the increasingly sedentary lifestyle will engender a higher incidence of ailment. More overweight people means more patients suffering from cardiovascular diseases such as vein hardening, diabetes and hypertension. Thirdly, the absence of face-to –face contact may induce distrust between business partners. An inherent sense of disbelief is apt to ruin a telecommunicated negotiation when negotiators can only see videos of each other transmitted via the Internet.
表示“提高,增进”,enhance boost 要表示“产生”的意思,后面是好的结果,用bring about 后面是不好的结果用engender 后面是抽象名词比如心理活动,用induce 破坏undermine, jeopardize, endanger, ruin, wreck, havoc on, spoil, devastate
主体段2(不少于1+6句) This trend also has widespread repercussions on society as a whole. In the first place, the burgeoning e-commerce will, doubtless, boost corporate efficiency immeasurably. And higher efficiency means more earnings and less costs for businesses. In the second place, online fraud, be it banking or trading, retail or wholesale is sure to abound in the cyberspace. We must search for practicable and effectual means of curbing it. In the third place, the proliferation of e-commerce may exacerbate man’s overdependence on technology. And that can render our lives unspontaneous and our tempo of life too fast and furious.
让…..进一步恶化aggravate exacerbate worsen
结尾段(不少于2句) In sum, there is no denying that the virtual is exerting influence on our lives in various ways . It is a key that we take advantage of the upside of this trend and in the meantime mitigate its downside as much as possible.
消的影响 baneful influence/ pernicious influence 积的影响 beneficial influence/ advantageous influence 深远的影响 profound influence
雅思大作文范文：全球化的弊端
Write about the following topic:
As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Model Answer:
Globalization means that in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat the same food, watch the same TV programmes, listen to the same music and we wear the same clothes. Some of this at least can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world.
On the surface, it may appear as if the global diversity of cultural identities is being lost. If, the argument goes, people in Tokyo and London look and dress the same, then that must mean that cultural differences are disappearing. However, I would argue that this is a very narrow definition of culture and that in fact cultural differences are as present as ever.
Cultural Identity is built on far more than just the films we watch or the jeans we wear. The foundation of cultural identity is shared values. When you look in detail at different cultures, you realize that the things that are important to one culture can be very different from the things valued by another culture.
Take my own culture, India, as an example and compare it to a very different culture, Japan. Although I have never visited Japan personally, I believe that it is a culture which places a lot of value on hard work and that people often work very long hours. The Indian people, in contrast, greatly value their leisure time and strive to spend as much lime with their family as they possibly can. Even if we consume the same products, I would argue that there are still some very deep-rooted differences.
To summarize, I do not accept that that total loss of cultural identity is inevitable, despite the influence of large companies and their products around the globe.
雅思写作范文：网络带来的利弊
The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.
Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs. Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.
雅思写作范文 大作文利弊分析型
Many countries aim to improve living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? (2013.5.6)
In most countries, living standard of citizens has been improved as a result of economic surge. This results in an apparent loss of some social values. Personally, I believe that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the benefits.
It is true that people enjoy a better life thanks to development of economy. In other words, citizens can receive a much higher income, so they have more dispensable money. For example, it was not imaginable for the majority to buy the colorful TV or computer set four decades ago, because they were too costly. By contrast, today these digital devices have become commonplace. Hence, economic development benefits people materialistically.
However, there is one major problem linked in part to economic development. To be precise, environment has been severely polluted and damaged due to overexploitation of resources utilized for economic development. For instance, to satisfy the demand of urban expansion, construction projects consume a large quantities of logs, and therefore forests have been cut down. Thus, such actions are conducive to economic development, but irrefutably at the cost of environment.
Moreover, the disappearance of social values also can be explained by economic development. That is to say, individuals and governments pay too much attention to economic development, and meanwhile ignore the importance of social values. For example, businessmen are likely to forget to celebrity with their family members even in important occasions, such as festivals or birthdays, if they are in business negotiation. So, traditional social values are lost.
To sum up, although people can have material improvement owing to economic development, environment and social values have been suffering.
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