Question

大家来帮忙改下我的英语作文吧，重金悬赏

Nowadays, studying English has became one of my daily habit due to the durative passion and great ambition of mine. However, A storm may araise from a clear sky. A tricky problem comes to me recently that is to understand complex sentence hardly.
I clearly know every world in sentence, but still can't catch the meaning in the whole.It depens on that I don't have a good command of sentence strcture, may caused by the shortage of insight and knowlege.
In order to solve this, I have to do some extra work, such as reading English books or newspapers and do more grammer exercises for at least 2 hours each day.
Put my plan into practice, I will do a good job!
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Answer 1

Nowadays, studying English has become one of my daily habits due to my persistent passion and great ambition. However, just like a storm may arise any time from a clear sky, problems will come from time to time. One of the tricky problems I am facing recently is that it is hard to understand complex sentences.
Sometimes, although I clearly know every word in a sentence, I still can't catch its whole meaning. The real problem, I think, is that I don't have a good command of sentence structure, which may be caused by the lack of specific, as well as general knowledge.
In order to solve this problem, I have to do some extra work, such as reading English books and newspapers and do more grammar exercises for at least two hours a day.
I believe that if I can put my plan into practice, I will achieve a good progress!

Answer 2

兄弟您如此热爱英语为何不能做到一丝不苟呢？
读过您的作文，我觉得整篇文章的“中文味”很强烈，不地道。
我至少发现了这些问题：
1. has became ... (晕)
2. araise from ...
3. understand ... hardly
4. know every world (厉害)
5. It depens on ...
6. solve this (this = ?)
7. grammer
8. each day (总觉得不舒服)
9. 结句 (自己看看少了什么？)

Answer 3

has became ----------became
araise from ------------arise anytime from
I clearly know every world in sentence, but still can't catch the meaning in the whole---------------I think that the words of the sentences are difficult for me,I can't catch them whole meaning
It depens on that I don't have a good command of sentence strcture, may caused by the shortage of insight and knowlege.----------------
Because I'm not good at the command of sentence structure,which may be caused by the lack of specific, as well as general knowledge.
this--------thias problem
Put my plan into practice, I will do a good job!--------------I think if I put my plan into practice,I will get a good grate!