Question

帮我的英语自我介绍写几个过渡句和翻译几个词组

Hello everyone, my name is XXX.I am honored to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 18 years old and I am a senior student at XX No.X high school.
除了这些，我最想说的是我的梦想。（这里我觉得需要一个过渡句，你也可以不按照我草拟的中文句子来翻译，只要能使使全文更加流畅）
I have a passion for computer games,and it dates back to my childhood.Having realized that most of games are just for entertainment,I dream of making a game which can be called the ninth art.In order to realize it,I studied programming in my senior year,and got the first prize in NOIP2008. it required a load of knowledge,So I studied hard and read many books.所以（So？）I am on the A-LIST（这个地方我觉得再用So 不太好，能不能换一种表达？）.正是这个梦想，激励着我不断奋斗，让我成为同龄人中的佼佼者（翻译）。I believe, through 学校的培养（翻译）和my continuous hard work,my dream will come true.
That's all.Thanks for listening.
这是我为即将进行的自主招生面试写的自我介绍

Answer 1

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1.
Besides,all I want to say is my dream.
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建议：

最好这样过渡：

You know ,everyone has a wonderful dream including myself. Today all I want to do is sharing(分享) my dream with you.

翻译：大家都知道，每一个人都有自己绮丽的梦想，包括我自己。今天我想和大家一同分享我的美梦。

★（如果是演讲，说时稍加停顿。如果是作文最好将you know换成As far as you can see--正如你所知道的一样）
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2.（So？）I am on the A-LIST

建议换成:This way I got into a improving process of the A-list

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3.正是这个梦想，激励着我不断奋斗，让我成为同龄人中的佼佼者（翻译）。

It is my dream that inspries me to try my best to make it and makes me become outstanding(adj.杰出的；卓越的).
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4.I believe, through 学校的培养（翻译）和my continuous hard work,my dream will come true.

注：一般不这样表述。请参阅下句：

I believe that I'll live my dream with the foster(培养;栽培) of our school.Of course I can't go（引申义：前行）without my effort.

Answer 2

Hello everyone, my name is XXX.I am honored to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 18 years old and I am a senior student at XX No.X high school.
除了这些，我最想说的是我的梦想。（这里我觉得需要一个过渡句，你也可以不按照我草拟的中文句子来翻译，只要能使使全文更加流畅）
I have a passion for computer games,and it dates back to my childhood.Having realized that most of games are just for entertainment,I dream of making a game which can be called the ninth art.In order to realize it,I studied programming in my senior year,and got the first prize in NOIP2008. it required a load of knowledge,So I studied hard and read many books.所以（So？）I am on the A-LIST（这个地方我觉得再用So 不太好，能不能换一种表达？）.正是这个梦想，激励着我不断奋斗，让我成为同龄人中的佼佼者（翻译）。I believe, through 学校的培养（翻译）和my continuous hard work,my dream will come true.
That's all.Thanks for listening.
这是我为即将进行的自主招生面试写的自我介绍

Answer 3

---------------------翻--译--如--下-----------------------------------
1.
Besides,all
I
want
to
say
is
my
dream.
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建议：
最好这样过渡：
You
know
,everyone
has
a
wonderful
dream
including
myself.
Today
all
I
want
to
do
is
sharing(分享)
my
dream
with
you.
翻译：大家都知道，每一个人都有自己绮丽的梦想，包括我自己。今天我想和大家一同分享我的美梦。
★（如果是演讲，说时稍加停顿。

Answer 4

你好，我稍微改写了一下，供你参考吧，祝面试顺利！

Good morning, Madam/Sir(毕竟人家是面试官). Thank you very much for the oppotunity.

My name is XXX, I am a senior student from No.X high school.

（先说一些关于自己成绩的硬性指标，比如 优秀班干部，三好学生，等等，然后再后面谈梦想，后谈的东西 会留下比较深刻的印象）

Like lots of other teenagers of our generation, I have been attracted by computer(我觉得最好表现你以计算机的热情，电脑游戏是表现方式之一) since I was a kid. However, soon, I realized that most of computer games are just for entertainment, ever since then, I have been dreaming of creating a new computer game which is not only fun, but also let people learn things, encourage them to have dreams, and help them to be their personal best. I want to call it THE NINTH ART.

Tp pursue my dream, I have studied programming by myself in senior year,and won the first prize in the competition match NOIP2008, which is (如果面试的人不太清楚这个比赛，就适当说下这个比赛特别厉害之类的). This prize is a big approval for my computer knowledge and operation skills，since it required advanced programming abillity.

My dream cheers me up to be my persoal best, and I can not appreciate more if I can have the opportunity to continue my education in XXX school.

Thank you very much for your time.

Answer 5

过渡句 Except all of this， I also want to tell you something about my dream。
所以（So？）改为 Hence
正是这个梦想，激励着我不断奋斗，让我成为同龄人中的佼佼者（翻译）Because of this dream, I am encouraged work hard, and make me much better than each other.
学校的培养 school's education and