6年级英语作文【我的未来】旁带中文
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I'm not sure about the future. Because I am not really sure what I'll be doing in the future. And I think the future is far away from me. I'm not really sure if I really have a chance in the future.
I guess that I will be working and may be a interpreter or a pilot. I like English. I think English is very useful and it is very difficult and exciting. I'm interested in it. Perhaps it is a good or interesting career for me. I like travelling too. I want to travel around the world.
But I'm too busy enjoying my life now. In the weekdays, I have many subjects to learn.And in the weekends, I have many friends with me. Sometimes we go shopping and sometimes we do many different things. I have a good family and I must look after my parents because I have grown up.I think it is enough for me.
So I don't worry about the future.I'm really sure I will have a good and nice future if I work hard at my study.
我不知道未来。因为我的确不知道我会在今后的工作。我认为,未来是远离了我。我不太知道,如果我真的有一个未来的机会。
我想我会的工作,可能是翻译或试点。我喜欢英语。我觉得英语是非常有用的,这是非常困难的,令人振奋。我很感兴趣。也许对我来说是好的或有趣的职业生涯。我喜欢旅行了。我想周游世界。
但是我太忙了,我现在的生活享受。在平日,我有很多科目学习.并且在周末,我与我的许多朋友。有时我们去逛街,有时我们做很多不同的事情。我有一个良好的家庭,我必须照顾我的父母,因为我长大.我认为是足够了。
因此,我不担心未来.我是真的相信,我将有一个良好和美好的未来,如果我工作,我努力学习。
I guess that I will be working and may be a interpreter or a pilot. I like English. I think English is very useful and it is very difficult and exciting. I'm interested in it. Perhaps it is a good or interesting career for me. I like travelling too. I want to travel around the world.
But I'm too busy enjoying my life now. In the weekdays, I have many subjects to learn.And in the weekends, I have many friends with me. Sometimes we go shopping and sometimes we do many different things. I have a good family and I must look after my parents because I have grown up.I think it is enough for me.
So I don't worry about the future.I'm really sure I will have a good and nice future if I work hard at my study.
我不知道未来。因为我的确不知道我会在今后的工作。我认为,未来是远离了我。我不太知道,如果我真的有一个未来的机会。
我想我会的工作,可能是翻译或试点。我喜欢英语。我觉得英语是非常有用的,这是非常困难的,令人振奋。我很感兴趣。也许对我来说是好的或有趣的职业生涯。我喜欢旅行了。我想周游世界。
但是我太忙了,我现在的生活享受。在平日,我有很多科目学习.并且在周末,我与我的许多朋友。有时我们去逛街,有时我们做很多不同的事情。我有一个良好的家庭,我必须照顾我的父母,因为我长大.我认为是足够了。
因此,我不担心未来.我是真的相信,我将有一个良好和美好的未来,如果我工作,我努力学习。
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第一句话有些问题,用surprise有些不妥,和后文没有什么关系。你可以写成“i
was
very
happy
yesterday”或者“yesterday
was
a
fine
day”.“there
were
lots
and
lots
of
people
there”这句话有问题应改为there
were
lots
of
people
there.
"the
people
was
sang,danced
and
played
chess
there."people前不加"the"
而且这句话语法有问题,应该改为people
sang
danced
and
played
chess.“be+doing”是现在进行时不适合用在这里,因为整篇文章用的都是过去时,文章时态要统一
“the
food
was
chinese
food”这个我也不确定对不对,但觉得怪怪的,可以换一种方式来讲“we
ate
chinese
food.”
“they
were
very
delicious”这句话不对,因为cinese
food是不可数名词,一般看作单数所以应改成“it
was
very
delicious.”
"then
we
saw
chinese
dancing
in
there."这句也有问题。“there"是副词,副词前不加定冠词“the”
“
i
want
learn
this
dancing”这句时态错了,应该是“wanted”还有应该是“i
wanted
to
learn
this
dancing”这里有一个动词不定式“want
to
do
something”
“it's
a
very
prefect
day!”时态错误!应是“it
was
a
very
prefect
day!”
上面的都是我自己改的,应该都对,你自己仔细再看一下,有好多东西可能小学还没有教过,所以你错得比较多,不过没有关系的,以后在初中里都会讲的。你一定要再接再厉哦!谢谢~~~
was
very
happy
yesterday”或者“yesterday
was
a
fine
day”.“there
were
lots
and
lots
of
people
there”这句话有问题应改为there
were
lots
of
people
there.
"the
people
was
sang,danced
and
played
chess
there."people前不加"the"
而且这句话语法有问题,应该改为people
sang
danced
and
played
chess.“be+doing”是现在进行时不适合用在这里,因为整篇文章用的都是过去时,文章时态要统一
“the
food
was
chinese
food”这个我也不确定对不对,但觉得怪怪的,可以换一种方式来讲“we
ate
chinese
food.”
“they
were
very
delicious”这句话不对,因为cinese
food是不可数名词,一般看作单数所以应改成“it
was
very
delicious.”
"then
we
saw
chinese
dancing
in
there."这句也有问题。“there"是副词,副词前不加定冠词“the”
“
i
want
learn
this
dancing”这句时态错了,应该是“wanted”还有应该是“i
wanted
to
learn
this
dancing”这里有一个动词不定式“want
to
do
something”
“it's
a
very
prefect
day!”时态错误!应是“it
was
a
very
prefect
day!”
上面的都是我自己改的,应该都对,你自己仔细再看一下,有好多东西可能小学还没有教过,所以你错得比较多,不过没有关系的,以后在初中里都会讲的。你一定要再接再厉哦!谢谢~~~
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未来我是大老板,超有钱,我带着父母周游世界!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
未来我是大老板,超有钱,我带着父母周游世界!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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when I was young,I dreamed of having a pair of wings.Because I want to fly in the clear sky.……
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