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高手来帮忙写篇英语作文，按照模板写，谢谢

四．黄金模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving ______.
First, ______.
Second, ______.
Last but not least, ______.
These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of _______.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
五．实战演练
假如你是李明，请根据下表内容，给你们学校的校长写一封建议信。（可适当增加细节。）

理由 吃饭时人太多，要排很长时间的队；还有不少同学占位，这使很多同学没有吃饭的座位。
措施 禁止占位； 各年级轮流吃饭，如：可以让高年级的同学晚十分钟去吃饭； 有条件的话，再建一个食堂。

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving our cafeteria's service .

First,there are so many students have meal at the same time.So students eating there need stand in a long line and wait for a long time.I think we can have meal at different time.For example, the high grate students can eat 10 minutes latter.

Second,many students use book or something else put on the tables and other students cannot use the tables.This kind of things should not happened.

Last but not least,if we have that condition,we can built another cafeteria.

These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of our school.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Liming

写得比较仓促，见谅