Question

各位大虾帮我一篇英语短文,感激不尽~~~

六.书面表达
根据中英文提示,写一篇意思连贯,符合逻辑的短文.要求:1.所给英文提示词语必须都用上.2.至少70词.
提示:1.上星期六上午我一直在图书馆看书.2.走出图书馆发现自行车不见了,只好步行回家.3.昨天去买车，款式很多难以挑选.4.店主说,无锡产的金狮自行车物美价廉,我买了一辆白色的.5.walk, home, Jinshi bike,
made,in wuxi.
(满足以上条件的文章,偶感激不尽,并追加!)
fen307 师傅,你可以翻译一下吗

Answer 1

Last Saturday ,I read books in the library all the morning long.However, when I walked out of the library, my bike was gone,so I had to walk home.
Yesterday,I went to buy a new bike,but there were so many styles that I did't know which one to buy.The shopkeeper told me Jinshin bikes ,which were made in Wuxi, were good and the price was low.The I chose a white one and thanked the shopkeeper.
我这篇是不是好很多呢?上面的有很多时态用错了,I'm right,he is wrong.

Answer 2

Last Saturday ,I had read in the library all the morning.After I walk out of the library,I found that my bike had lost,so I had to go home on foot.Yesterday,I went to buy a new bike.There are so many kinds that I can't choose which one.The seller said that jinshi bike made in wuxi is not only cheap but also good in quality,so I bought a white one.