Question

英文改错。。急！！！

When i was doing my homework , the phone ring . it

was jane .she wanten to speak my elder brother. i told

her that he had left home just a few minute before。i

asked her to ring up again tonight，and she said that she

wouldn”t be free。So I asked her that whether she"d like to

leave a message. Jane said there would haye a lecture

on Enlish poetey by a visiting professor in the Lecture

Hall at 6:00 o"clock tomorrow evening and asks me to tell

my brother not be late. And she would wait for him at

the gate. I told her I will tell him when he came back.

Answer 1

第一行：the phone ring （ring 改成 ringed;注意时态）
第二行：she wanted to speak (to) my elder brother ;加上一个to
第三行：before 改成 ago
第四行：and 改成 but
第五行：正确
第六行：Jane said there would have（have 改成 be） a lecture ；
这是there be 结构。
第七行：on Enlish poetry （加上一个词：given）by a visiting ...
第八行：and asks（asks 改成 asked ;注意时态一致） me to tell
第九行：my brother not （加上一个词：to）be late
这是tell sb. to do sth 的结构。
第十行： I told her I will（will 改成 would） tell him when he came back.

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Answer 2

When i was doing my homework , the phone-rang . it

was jane .she wanten speak to my elder brother. i told

her that he had left home just a few minutes before。i

asked her to ring up again tonight，but she said she

wouldn”t be free。So I asked her that whether she"d like to

leave a message. Jane said there would be a lecture

on Enlish poetey of a visiting professor in the Lecture

Hall at 6:00 o"clock tomorrow evening and asked me to tell

my brother not to be late. And she would wait for him at

the gate. I told her I wouldl tell him when he came back.

1.ring-rang
2.speak (to)
3.minute-minutes
4.and-but
5.that删去
6.have-be
7.by-of
8.asks-asked
9.not (to) be
10.will-would

Answer 3

1.ring-rang 用一般过去时
2.speak (to) speak是不及物动词，需要加TO再加宾语
3.minute-minutes 复数形式
4.and-but 转折
5.that删去 后来是WHETHER引导的宾语从句，不要再加THAT
6.have-be THERE BE句型
7.对的
8.asks-asked 时态一
9.not (to) be
10.will-would

Answer 4

1.ring 改为 rang
2.jane 应该大写
3.wanten 改为 wanted
4.speak 后加 to
5.i 大写
6.and 改成but
7.that 不要
8.at the Lecture
9.not to be late
10.will改为would

Answer 5

1. ring → rang
2. speak和my中间加入to
3. minute → minutes
4. and → but
5. 去掉that
6. have → be
7. √
8. asks → asked
9. not和be中间加入to
10. will → would