Question

英语作文An Unforgetable Day

用一般过去时，70词以上。新概念2册10课水平。急急急！

Answer 1

today is my bithday.When i woke up morning , my mother has cooked a delicious meal for me .I enjoyed it much . At noon my father brought me a bithday cake and song a song for me. I felt so warm that i could't speak a word . i thought a wish that both my parents have a good health .
Also i recievd a lot of gifts from my friends ,i'm glad that i have owned so much .
Today is really an unforgetable day for me that i have learnt a lot of thinks . Thanks to all the peole that love me

Every day is the same from I'm a middle school student.But today is such an unforgettable day and I'm so happy.My friends and I go to the park to do something for the people.We clean the floor,help children and the old and give out food and drink.When people say thank you to us,we are so happy!

　Perhaps you had some important or unforgetable moments in your life. And they have a great influence on you.Well,i had an unforgetable day,too.I can't forgetable the day when I first came to the senior high school,i can't forgetable it.At that time,i saw the school was full of green trees,red flowers.The surrounding was so beautiful.How excited i was!Not only because of the splendid school,but also I had already been a senior school student in this school.I made up my mind that whatever I might experience,I would try my best to study hard.

这些可以么？希望对你有帮助。^_^

Answer 2

today is my bithday.When i woke up morning , my mother has cooked a delicious meal for me .I enjoyed it much . At noon my father brought me a bithday cake and song a song for me. I felt so warm that i could't speak a word . i thought a wish that both my parents have a good health .
Also i recievd a lot of gifts from my friends ,i'm glad that i have owned so much .
Today is really an unforgetable day for me that i have learnt a lot of thinks . Thanks to all the peole that love me

Every day is the same from I'm a middle school student.But today is such an unforgettable day and I'm so happy.My friends and I go to the park to do something for the people.We clean the floor,help children and the old and give out food and drink.When people say thank you to us,we are so happy!

　Perhaps you had some important or unforgetable moments in your life. And they have a great influence on you.Well,i had an unforgetable day,too.I can't forgetable the day when I first came to the senior high school,i can't forgetable it.At that time,i saw the school was full of green trees,red flowers.The surrounding was so beautiful.How excited i was!Not only because of the splendid school,but also I had already been a senior school student in this school.I made up my mind that whatever I might experience,I would try my best to study hard.

这些可以么？希望对你有帮助。^_^

追问

太长了，而且有些语法我还没接触过