Question

英语作文题目：自我介绍，初中的，只需要40个单词就ok，我用百度翻译翻了一篇，求英语帝看看有ok么！

Hello. My name is xxx, I am
a boy,I’m 13 years old, I became a middle school
student just now, in the middle school campus I made
many new friends also met a lot of new teacher

Answer 1

ok，不过初中怎么学的跟2年纪一样。。

追问

嘛~柳州这边小学英语基本不考试了，老师也不怎么教东西，我也一年没学英语了能有2年纪都不错了....还有你确定OK？

追答

我帮你改改，弄点文采

追问

↖(^ω^)↗快点撒~

↖(^ω^)↗快点撒~

追答

Hello. My name is xxx, I am
a boy,I’m 13 years old, I am a middle school
student just now, in the middle school campus I made
many new friends also met a lot of new teacher.l am good at playing basketball.Of all the subjects,like English best.Although study English is hard ,l still can do my best to work hard.How great l am你要是写这个老师绝对对你刮目相看

Answer 2

一个小问题
in the middle school campus I made
many new friends also met a lot of new teacher
改成
I made many new friends and met a lot of new teacher in the middle school campus
或
in the middle school campus，I made many new friends an met a lot of new teacher

追问

没其他问题了么？

追答

以上，没了

Answer 3

嗯，不错，求采纳！