Question

初二的英语作文给我找找语法错误的

A boy has a bird.He tied string to the bird.He play with the bird everyday.He thought the bird is very happy and he is ,too.One day he saw a girl,the girl is very sad.Because she lose hei mother.A policeman is beside the girl.And taken she to go home.The boy thought,the bird is as soon as the girl,it need home ,too.SO the boy let the bird to go to home.
要70个单词啊,你减了那么少,还够吗

Answer 1

A boy has a bird.He tied a string to the bird and play with the bird everyday.He thought the bird is very happy just like he is.
One day he saw a girl sad.Because she lost her mother.There is a policeman beside the girl and then sent her home.The boy thought that the bird also needs home just like the girl does ,SO the boy lets the bird to go home

呵呵！蛮简单的文章，注意必要时用一些连词，否则一断文章里全是用句号隔起来的断句非常不好。

Answer 2

A boy had a bird. He tied a string to the bird. He played with the bird everyday. He thought the bird was very happy, and so was he. One day he saw a girl, the girl was very sad, because she had lost her mother. A policeman was beside the girl. He took her to go back to her home. The boy thought: the bird was as poor as the girl, it needs home too. So the boy let the bird to go to home.

Answer 3

He thought the bird is very happy and he is ,too
改为He thought the bird was very happy ，and so did him
看到后来，时态混乱