Question

有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物，拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项

有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物，拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以“No Wasting On Food”为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动。要点提示：Reason:1. a waste of food, money2. pollute the environment ……Suggestion:1. eat up all your food/clear your plate2. leftovers(剩饭菜)……3. order less or smaller dishes 注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2. 语句流畅，书写规范；3. 词数80-100词；4. 文中不能出现真实人名、地名等信息；5. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。No Wasting On FoodRecently, many restaurants around our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign(活动) against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it’s not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China. They don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.                             What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.                         .

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以No Wasting On Food为题，介绍一下光盘行动。所谓的光盘行动，就是吃光你盘子里的食物，珍惜粮食，拒绝浪费。这篇短文主要包含两个部分：第一部分是我们要吃光盘子里所有食物的原因，有两个，一是这是一种钱和食物的浪费；二是这样做还会污染环境；第二部分是我们应该怎样做才能节约粮食，不浪费，为此提出一些建议。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并且还要使这些内容更充实。例如我们在提建议的时候，需要将这些要点补充成完整的句子，再加上自己对这个活动的理解，提出自己的建议。写作时，我们可以联系我们学过的句型和短语，多注意语句之间的连接，使表达流畅。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。这篇短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了什么是光盘行动。首先作者介绍了我们要吃光盘子里所有食物的原因，除了题目中给出的两个原因之外，作者还补充了一个，即吃得太多对我们的健康没有好处。这个补充比较适合这里的情景，比较贴切；接下来的第三段中作者写了我们应该怎样做，才能拒绝浪费。按照题目中的提示，作者主要写了三个建议。在这篇短文中，作者使用了很多比较好的句式和短语，如Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life、I believe it is meaningful for us to take an active part in this activity、Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food、In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food等。这些句型和短语的使用为短文增色不少。