大家麻烦帮忙看一下,这篇英语文章有没有错
看到错就帮忙改一下拉,最好说明了goodmorning,everyone.mynameis???.I'mgladtobehereforintroducemyself.I'...
看到错就帮忙改一下拉,最好说明了
good morning,everyone.my name is ???.I'm glad to be here for introduce myself.
I'm a 14-year-old girl.I have the Very extensive interest,hearing pop music,swim and so on.They make my life colorful.above all,I'm a outgoing and easygoing girl.
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good morning,everyone.my name is ???.I'm glad to be here for introduce myself.
I'm a 14-year-old girl.I have the Very extensive interest,hearing pop music,swim and so on.They make my life colorful.above all,I'm a outgoing and easygoing girl.
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good morning,everyone.my name is ???.I'm glad to be here introducing myself. I'm a 14-year-old girl。 As it is the age with energy, I have many hobbies, such as swimming, listening to the pop music and tennis( 最好用3个爱好,要不然说服力不够,我给你加了一个打网球你可以改的)and they make my life with full of passion and excitments. Also it makes me a outgoing and easygoing girl. Thanks!
给你改了一些 excitments :带有激情的事情 passion: 活力 energy: 活力的另外一种说法 tennis:网球
给你改了一些 excitments :带有激情的事情 passion: 活力 energy: 活力的另外一种说法 tennis:网球
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恩,我英语还可以,不过你的文章在哪呢?
大哥……
大哥……
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问问题的是MM的话就太可爱了,我喜欢粗心的MM
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