作文如下：
Dear Mr Johson, I have enjoyed my English learning since I started my lessons with you. However, I personally believe our English class can still be improved more if more attentions can be paid in the following aspects.
亲爱的约翰逊先生，自从我和你们开始上课以来，我一直很喜欢我的英语学习。然而，我个人认为，如果我们能在以下几个方面给予更多的关注，我们的英语课仍然可以提高。
More situation dialogues are needed in classroom to help us understand the use of certain expressions;
课堂上需要更多的情景对话来帮助我们理解某些表达的用法；
More reading and questioning time should be spared for students, so they can learn from questions and answers;
应该为学生留出更多的阅读和提问时间，以便他们能够从问答中学习；
Some Chinese style homework such as manually copying texts from English textbook should be scraped because such a practice doesn't help us learn more.
一些中国式的作业，比如从英语课本上手工抄写课文，应该被删掉，因为这样的做法无助于我们学到更多。
More explanations to errors in our writing practice should be added.
对于我们写作练习中的错误，应该增加更多的解释。
Dear Mr Johson, I have enjoyed my English learning since I started my lessons with you. However, I personally believe our English class can still be improved more if more attentions can be paid in the following aspects.
More situation dialogues are needed in classroom to help us understand the use of certain expressions;
More reading and questioning time should be spared for students, so they can learn from questions and answers;
Some Chinese style homework such as manually copying texts from English textbook should be scraped because such a practice doesn't help us learn more.
More explanations to errors in our writing practice should be added;
It would be better to rrecommend the best writing of our classmates to us and add your comments, so we can learn from reading it.
It would be better to record what we read and talk to each other in English and you make comments on playing it back.
Our writing practice should be cut short, it is too much to ask us to write an essay with minimum 200 words each day.
The questions below each chapter are too much to complete in one day. It would be better to ask us to do it in a week.
