Question

假设你是李华,现在你正在读高二，你的父母正殷切期待着你在学习上的进步。请你按以下内容要点给自己的父

假设你是李华,现在你正在读高二，你的父母正殷切期待着你在学习上的进步。请你按以下内容要点给自己的父母写一封感谢信。内容要点：1、感谢父母多年来,特别是高二这一年来无微不至的关怀。2、自己近期学习一直十分刻苦,进步不小。这次考试也都很顺利,发挥出了自己的水平,希望父母放心。3、假期一定多帮父母做些家务,还要让父母品尝一下自己亲手做的菜。注意： 1、词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear parents,Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， LiHua

Answer 1

Dear parents, 　　Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Two. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I have performed my ability in this exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest. 　　After this exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. And I also mean to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner for you both in person. 　　My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest! Best wishes Yours， LiHua

试题分析：本文是封感谢信。感谢父母多年来的关爱。提示内容详细，考生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题。首先要注意文章的时态，可用现在完成时和将来时。人称用第一和第二人称。根据写作要求文章分三段来写。第一段感谢父母的关爱及自己近期表现。第二段考试后自己的打算。第三段表达对父母的祝福。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。 【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如words have failed me，express my thanks to you，have made some progress，get along well with，set your mind at rest等。还运用了现在完成进行时These days I have been studying hard；定语从句I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. 强调谓语部分do have a rest等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：After this exam，and，also等。