Question

英语句子求大神改错

which antibody/manufacturer should i choose for staining fibrotic scar in a mouse model of spinal contusion injury?

i need to analyze the fibrotic scar size and i have used laminin-specific antibody,but it didn't work.
Can anyone suggest a good antibody?

这是我要在国外论坛上问的问题，求大神们帮我改下英语错误，或者再改得诚恳一点，谢谢！

Answer 1

写得相当不错，老外完全可以看懂，赞一个!

如果要改的话，那么，

1. scar是可数名词，加s变复数；或者前加定冠词the，变为staining the fibrotic scar；
   

2. the fibrotic scar size可以改为the size of the scar，fibrotic可以省略；

3. 另外时态要一致。i have used laminin-specific antibody,but it didn't work.可改为

   I used a laminin-specific antibody, but it didn't work.
   

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谢谢！不过fibritic scar是专有名词，改了意思就变了。。。