急,求解答英语短文改错
to 改 for (to表方向,朝着;for表对象,为了)
had wrapped 中间加 it ( had sth. done 使某事被做 )
there 改 where (整个句子中有两个小句子,后一句为定语从句,句与句之间要用连词连接,故用where,there只是表示地点的副词,不具有连接的作用。如there前改成句号,则不需要连接,there就可以用了。)
walked 改 walking (此句中,非谓语walk的执行者为he,主动关系)
fall 改 fell (文章在讲故事,事情已发生,一般过去时态)
their box 改 their boxes (their他们俩的,box应为复数)
picked up the box 中, the 改 a (Tom慌乱中捡起其中一个,此处box不特定,如特定就不会拿错了)
had opened 去掉 had (had opened过去完成时,表示open要发生在find之前,而open和find几乎是同时的动作,不能明确分出前后;另一种可记住Not until句型中,如果是过去的事,前后都用 一般过去)
that was inthe box中, that 改 what (what was in the box 为后面was 的主语从句,从句中缺少主语,类似与小时候学的对划线部分提问,what意思是“什么”,that在主语从句中无实际意思)
Obvious 改 Obviously (句首副词,注意首字母大写)