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看看这几句我用英语翻译得怎么样

秋天的雨，是一把钥匙。它带着清凉和温柔，轻轻地，轻轻地，趁你没留意，把秋天的大门打开了。
the rain of the fall is a key.it takes cool and warm,lightly,lightly, while you dont notice, make the gate of fall open.
你看，它把黄色给了银杏树，黄黄的叶子像一把把小扇子，扇哪扇哪，扇走了夏天的炎热。you look,it gives yellow for the maidenhair tree.yellow leaves are like one and one little fans,and fan the heat of summer away.它把红色给了枫树，红红的枫叶像一枚枚邮票，飘哇飘哇，邮来了秋天的凉爽。it gives red for the maple,and red maple leaves are like one and one stamps,send the cool of the fall.
橙红色是给果树的，橘子、柿子你挤我碰，争着要人们去摘呢！
orange red gives fruit trees,the orange and persimmon you crowd and me bump,and vie for people picks.
秋天的雨藏着非常好闻的气味。the rain of the fall hides very fragrant smell.
梨香香的，玻璃甜甜的，还有苹果、橘子，好多好多香甜的气味，都躲在小雨滴里呢！pears are fragrant,pineapples are sweet,and apples, oranges many and many fragrant sweet smells all hide in the little rain drops.
小朋友的脚，常被那香味勾住。the little friend's foot was often hooked by that fragrance.
松柏穿上厚厚的、油亮亮的衣裳，杨树、柳树的叶子飘到树妈妈的脚下。the pine and cypress puts on the thick and oil bright clothes,the leaves of the poplar and willow fly on the tree mother's feet.
秋天的雨，带给大地的是一曲丰收的歌，带给小朋友的是一首欢快的歌。the rain of the fall gives ground a good harvest song and gives little friend a happy song.

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the summer vacation is the best part of the year for most american children. 暑假对绝大多数美国孩子来说是一年中最好的部分。 --- 对多数美国孩子来说，暑假是一年中最开心的。 the weather is usually good, so that one can spend most of ones time playing in the garden, or if one lives in the country, out in the woods or fields. 天气通常很好，所以一个孩子可以在花园花大多数时间玩，或许如果一个住在乡村、树林外或田野。 ==== 天气一般挺好，所以孩子们可以在花园里尽情玩耍，如果住在农村的话，可以去树林里或田野里玩耍。 even if one lives in a big town, one can usually go to a park to play. 甚至如果一个住在大城镇，一个通常可以去公园玩。。。。如果住在城镇地区，通常可以去公园玩。 ======= 内容很简单，看着翻译就好了

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