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请英文高手帮忙

Answer 1

I'll try (not sure if that's what you want): 1) You may place any future orders by using our toll-free telephone number
or our toll-free fax number (toll-free usually refer to tele. numbers. Fax numbers always carry a charge) Alternatively
to save our time (that sounds extremely rude! 'to improve efficiency')
(add 'please'?) use the order form provided in our catalogue. 2)As per your request
the following information about obtaining a Hong Kong Special Administration Region (HKSAR) passport has been located. Either: 'As per your request
the information...has been located.' or: 'As per you request
the following information...has been attached.' 3)Further to our telephone conversation this morning
a new quotation and order form will be delivered to you some time later ('shortly' would be better). Being printed (this is wrong pletely. 'As print-outs' or 'The information as ready print outs are not immediately available at this moment.')
we do not have them immediately available. 4)Remember
(again
sounds extremely forceful
I'd cut this word out) we are the only catalogue sales pany that guarantees your full satisfaction. If you are not pletely happy
pleased or (cut out) satisfied
we will arrange for a prompt refund
credit or surrogate ('replacement' would be better). We will also refund or credit all shipping costs associated with the returned items. 5)Beeen the period of 1 and 30 April
I made nine *** all purchases. Three of these purchases were given telephone approval granted (can cut out) by the bank. When I received my last statement
(cut this out. Traditionally
one cannot start a sentence with 'when' in writng) a copy of which is enclosed. I was flabbergasted to see that I was charged $100 each for these purchases because my account was over my limit. (I was astonished to find that each of these purchases were charged $100 due to over-spending. A copy of my last statement is enclosed.)
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