Question

短文改错when I was an elementary student aging ten

Answer 1

原文:
When I was an elementary school student aging ten, I took part in a singing competition in our city. This was my first time to be in a singing competition. In the day of the competition, I was asked to enter into a studio room, which there was only one person and a piano. The man asked me to sing in front of the microphone, following his piano playing. My mother was waiting for me outside the studio. I thought that I sang better at the time. So when I finished and walked out the studio, my mother asked, “What happened to your voices? Why couldn’t we hear you?” Then, I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone.

答案:
1．aging→ aged
【解析】错误类型：形容词误用。aged为形容词，意为“……岁的”

2.This→ That/It
【解析】错误类型：指示代词误用.that指代上文已提及或过去已发生的事,this指代下文将提及或之后将发生的事.此处改成It也可.

3．In→ On
【解析】错误类型：介词误用。在具体某一天应用介词on。on the day of the competition意为“在比赛那天”。

4．去掉enter后的into
【解析】错误类型：动词搭配错误. enter为及物动词,直接跟宾语,因此into多余了.

5．which→ where
【解析】错误类型：关系代词误用。where引导定语从句，修饰先行词a studio room，在定语从句中作地点状语。

6．better→ well
【解析】错误类型：比较级误用。句意为：我认为那次唱得很好，句中没有比较的含义。

7．So→ But
【解析】错误类型：连词误用。此处是转折关系,因此应该用But。

8．在out后加上of
【解析】错误类型：短语搭配错误.out of 是一个固定搭配,意为"从...出来".

9．voices→ voice
【解析】错误类型：名词单复数误用。每个人只有一种嗓音,因此用单数.

10．forget→ forgot
【解析】错误类型：时态误用。主句谓语动词realized为一般过去时，宾语从句的谓语动词也要用过去时。

Answer 2

aging改为aged

Answer 3

when I was an elementary student aged ten

Answer 4

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