Question

求英文翻译，

高中毕业后选择韩国留学，在读大学之前进行了一年的预科学习。在这一年期间，遇到很多困难，有时候会产生想要放弃的念头，但是当困难来临的时候，我会先冷静思考、针对问题把事情解决、在解决之后会进行自我反省。来到韩国之后，第一次一个人生活，生活需要自己料理。在这一段时间，培养出自己的事情自己负责的态度；对于时间的掌握生活的习惯等各方面逐渐培养出自己做事情有条有序的性格；快速适应生活环境，结交了许多外国朋友 ，开阔视野 ，接触不同国家文化 开阔国际观。因为朋友的原因，让我感受到乐观、热情、乐于助人的特征。自己主动乐观起来，原来不善交流转而认识到主动与人交流的重要性。在韩国与学习阶段学校安排了多姿多彩的课程，话剧表演是其中之一 。因为同组的同学来自于不同的国家，思想方式不同、语言不同、产生分歧摩擦。然而经过短期的冷静之后，我募集组员见面交流把自己的想法讲出来，重新制定计划、分配任务，在最后的组织性领导下成功解决事情，并取得了良好的成绩。
在留学期间，我有进行假日短暂的打工希望借助打工帮助我学习韩文，接触朋友发展个方面的技巧与给予课堂上无法获得的经验。因为是第一次尝试工作，刚开始工作时感受到自己的不足的地方很多，更加认识到工作都不易。然后不会的问题我会不耻下问，直到明白为止。开始的时候业务不熟练产生了不少的错误，面对社长的责罚认真听取并改正。工作虽然很辛苦，但是一直坚持到最后。工作让我磨练很多，感到学习之外的生活乐趣。在打工期间，引起我对经营方面产生了好奇，无论是关于库存、盘货、理货、人士相关的专业领域产生了好奇。通过网络查询、前辈推荐贵校在经营学方面、学术研究 ，业界有口皆碑，希望有机会成为贵校的一员认真的钻研自己喜爱的领域。
大学的学习，是为将来自己的事业知识和能力奠定基础，对自己未来的发展方向也是相当重要的。因此在大学期间我会努力充实韩语能力，为了提升韩语的听说读写，我将订阅韩文相关书籍、收听收看韩文类节目。中国企业已进入国际市场，培养英语能力也是重要的一课，同时增强电脑资讯专业能力。我将积极参加学校社团活动，培养人际关系和发挥个人才能，在课业方面，加强基础专业课程的学习，争取大学毕业时考取各类证书 ，厚植个人坚实事业背景获得企业青睐。在未来职涯，我想进入韩国企业工作，发挥求学过程中学习到的知识 ，了解自我的优势，找到自己的理想，为社会贡献自己最大的力量，在工作上受到大家给予的肯定支持，建立自己的人脉网络，这些自我目标是我前进的原动力，也是鼓励自己朝向未来方向一步步地迈进去实践！

Answer 1

After graduating from high school, the choice of Korean students, the University of reading in the prior to a year of preparatory study. During the year, encountered many difficulties, sometimes will have to give up the idea of, but when troubles come, I'll calm thinking, to solve the problem to settle things, in the solution after self reflection. After the first came to Korea, a personal life, life needs its own cooking. In this period of time, develop their own affairs and responsible attitude; for the time of master life habits and other aspects gradually developed to do things by themselves have ordered character; quickly adapt to the living environment, make many foreign friends, to broaden our horizons, contact different national culture broaden international view. Because of my friend's reason, let me feel optimistic, enthusiastic feature, helpful. His active optimism, the original poor communication to realize the importance of the initiative to communicate with people. In South Korea and the stage of learning schools arrange colorful curriculum, drama is one of the. Because of the same group of students from different countries, different modes of thought, language is different, differences of friction. However, after the short-term calm, I raise the crew to meet and communicate with each other to speak out his mind, to re plan, assign tasks, successfully solve the things at the organizational leadership, and achieved good results.
In the study period, I have holiday short working with hope to work to help me learn Korean, contact friends development skills and give the classroom can not gain experience. Because it is the first attempt to work, just started to work when you feel inadequate his lot, become more aware of the job are not easy to. Then you will not question I would ask, until you remember. At the beginning of the business skilled generated a lot of mistakes, in the face of president of the punishment to listen carefully and correct. Although the job is very hard, but always adhere to in the end. Work makes me feel a lot of practice, learning outside of the pleasure of life. In work period, caused me to operate curiosity, whether of inventory, inventory, tally, people related professional field of curiosity. Query through the network, your predecessors recommended in management science, academic research, industry reputation, hope to have the opportunity to become a member of your school poring over their favorite field.
The study of the University, is to lay the foundation for the future career of knowledge and ability, is also very important for their own direction of development in the future. Therefore, in university period I will work hard to enrich the Korean language ability, to enhance the Korean speaking and writing, I will subscribe to Han Wen related books, listening to and watching Han Wen class program. Chinese enterprises have entered the international market, but also an important lesson to train the ability of English, while enhancing the professional ability of computer information. I will actively participate in school club activities, and play to cultivate relationships in their personal ability, and strengthen the basic professional courses of study, for university graduates to obtain certificates, thick planting individual solid career background for enterprises to obtain the favor. In the future career, I want to work into the South Korean enterprises, learning to play in the process of studying knowledge, understand the advantages of self, to find their own ideal, for the community to contribute their greatest strength, by everybody appreciated support at work, build the human network of their own, these self target is the original my motivation, also encourage yourself toward the future direction step by step enter practice!

追问

可以不用百度翻译吗？你不知道里面好多错误嘛

Answer 2

不行，太多了。

追问

一段也行