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十万火急！一段英语翻译，帮忙看下，有没有翻错了，已经纠正了不少错误，看看还有没有问题，谢谢

The world famous Silk RoadSilk Road is a series of roads that connect east and west. The Silk Road extendsmore than 6000 kilometers，which was famous for the silk trade of ancient China. The trades of silk roads played an importantrole in the development of civilization in china, South Asia, Europe and the MiddleEast. It was through the Silk Road that Chinese four great inventions, whichare papermaking, gunpowder, compass and printing, were introduced to the allover the world. Similarly, the Chinese silk, tea and porcelain were alsospread all over the world. The communication of material culture is two-wayprocess and Europe also met the needs of the Chinese market to export variouskinds of goods and plants through the silk roads.

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The world famous Silk Road is a series of roads that connect [the] east and [the] west. The Silk Road ，which was famous for the silk trade of ancient China,extends more than 6000 kilometers. The trades of silk roads played an important role in the development of civilization in china, South Asia, Europe and the Middle East. It was through the Silk Road that [the] Chinese four great inventions, [namely] papermaking, gunpowder, compass and printing, were introduced to [the all over=删] the world. Similarly, the Chinese silk, tea and porcelain were also spread [to] all over the [world=globe]. The communication [between] material [cultures] is two-way process. [Therefore] Europe also met the [Chinese market needs by exporting] various kinds of goods and plants through the silk roads.

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OK. 这样写吧:
1) were introduced to the world over. 到世界各地
2) 如果没有"Therefore" 英文(连贯性)就不见了!The communication [between] material [cultures] is two-way process. [Therefore] Europe also met the [Chinese market needs by exporting] various kinds of goods and plants through the silk roads.
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Answer 2

The world famous Silk Road is a series of roads that connect east and west. The Silk Road extends more than 6000 kilometers，which was famous for the silk trade of ancient China. The trades of silk roads played an important role in the development of civilization in china, South Asia, Europe and the MiddleEast. It was through the Silk Road that Chinese four great inventions, which are papermaking, gunpowder, compass and printing, were introduced to all over the world. Similarly, the Chinese silk, tea and porcelain were also spread all over the world. The communication of material culture is two-way process and Europe also met the needs of the Chinese market to export various kinds of goods and plants through the silk roads.

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