Question

假如你是李华,Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是

假如你是李华,Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。信头信尾均已给出；词数100左右。Dear Jane,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Xiaohua

Answer 1

Dear Jane, How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit. Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Xiaohua

试题分析：本文是一篇开放作文，给李华写一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受，并没有给出什么要点要求学生结合滋生的实际情况写作，在行文中，要注意多用些高级句型和词汇，我们可适当增加连贯词，以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构，使文章结构严谨，增色不少。 写作亮点：I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me.和The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.这两句，使文章浑然一体。同时文章中使用了适当的连词，使用文章结构严谨，浑然一体。 点评：书面表达中的写信类作文，我们首先要完整的正确的表达出所有的写作要点。在写作中，如果语言基础好的话，多用较高级语法结构，这样可以使文章增色不少。同时要合理的使用适当的连词，这样文章才能结构严谨，浑然一体。