Question

求求各位大神帮帮忙做一道短文改错题 感激不尽！

Sailor Gutzler was only survivor in a plane crash that killed her family in Eddyville, Kentucky in January 3, 2015. It was reported that the 7-year-old girl has walked about a mile through the cold, dark wood, wearing a short-sleeve shirt, shorts and no shoes in the freezing wind. Bleeding and frightened, she was walking alone while she saw a light in the distance, it led her to Larry Wilkins' home. She was knocked on the door. Wilkins, 71, answered to find a thin, black-haired girl weeping and trembling. Eventual, with the assistance of the old man, she called the police for help. However, the brave girl helped the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction.

Answer 1

1. Sailor Gutzler was可以改成Sailor Gutzler is。这里没有必要非得用过去时
   

2. on January 3, 2015而不是in

3. It was reported that可以改成 It is reported that。这里没有必要非得用过去时

4. the 7-year-old girl has walked要么改成had walked要么去掉has

5. wood应该用复数woods，表示树林的意思

6. it led her to Larry Wilkins' home前面应该加and

7. She was knocked on the door要去掉was

8. answered to find最好改为answered and found

9. Eventual要改为Eventually

10. However, the brave girl helped改为Somehow

11. locate the crashing plane改为crashed
    
    

Answer 2

Sailor Gutzler was the only survivor in a plane crash which killed her family in Eddyville Kentucky in January 3th, 2015.

It was reported that the 7-year-old girl has walked for about a mile through the cold, dark wood, wearing a short-sleeve shirt, shorts and no shoes in the freezing wind.

Bleeding and frightened, she was walking alone while she saw a light in the distance.

It led her to Larry Willkins' home. She knocked the door. Willkins, 71, answered to find a thin, black-hair girl weeping and trembling.

Eventual, with the assistance of the old man, she called the police for help. After that, the brave girl helped the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction.

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