Question

大家帮我看看这篇英语作文？

我是在金山词霸翻译的 明天要交作业 可是怕老师看出 这篇作文是网上翻译弄的 所以 大家帮忙看看 有没有什么可以改进的 错误实在太多的话 希望有个好心人 能够帮忙写一篇 很短的英语观后感
Although the actor has been divorced, but near the end of the last to know when the first notice is that he has divorced his wife and his children and also to bring his wife's husband. . . (For I do not take take it so go die) had heard that phrase so often lost and we have to remember to treasure the face of disaster, but it is too late father's friends say goodbye to his son and embraced each other with their families waiting to adopt that moment when I think I should know what their minds are thinking only one thing "If you knew why, when so
Early. . . "I confess that I do not believe in doomsday argument, but I understand you do not want to face but had to face to face when the heart of things people have the feeling inside is a biological illness and death,

Answer 1

你得把中文原文贴出来啊，对照着看才好改。这都是翻乱了的，语法用词错误一大堆，谁知道你想说的是什么呀。没法改。有意思的是，你把这篇译文再用翻译机翻回中文，意思还是不对，可见这翻译机有多“智能”了。呵呵。