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英语问题，感谢解答

英语问题，感谢解答It makes him suprised that she not only doesnt praise him but also criticizes him.这句话有问题吗？不仅没有表扬而且批评了他

Answer 1

有问题，有语法错误，如果想知道具体的可以再问我

追问

为什么？

语法哪里有错？

追答

not only but also确实是不仅而且，但是这句话的中文本身就有问题。应该是不但。。。，反而。。。。。
并且，not only does not是有错误的，not连用并且就算not可以连用你的语序也错了，应该把does not提前
正确句子我放评论里了，没有改变你句子太多的意思

追问

我好像记得not only放在句首倒装，

Answer 2

有问题的
not only....but also....表示【递进关系】，不表示转折关系
It makes him suprised that she criticized him instead of praising him.

Answer 3

合适的表达是：
It makes him surprised that she critisizes him rather than praising him.