Question

【高分+追】请各位帮我翻译这篇自荐信！！！

Dear Boss:

首先，贵公司良好的形象与员工的素质吸引我投了这份自荐信。同时，我真诚地感谢您在繁忙的公务中浏览这份材料，我渴望得到您的了解与支持。

很高兴能向您介绍我自己。我叫XX，就读于XX大学人力资源专业。

我从小就受过良好的家教，让我拥有良好的修养以及外向的性格，做周密计划的行事风格，还有强烈的责任心。因此，在其他人看来，我易于与人打交道。所以很适合在贵公司做需要与人交流的职位。
因为我比较注重于实践，所以对于生活中需要练习的地方都有一定的学习。例如在软件方面我会非常熟练地使用Word，Excel的绝大部分功能以及制作PPT，还有PS的基础。另外，本人擅长于摄影。

至于工作经验，我做过一年的音乐教师，教别人学习爵士鼓。这个是把抽象的艺术用语言描述出来，锻炼了自己与别人交流的能力。
还在大学期间担任过两年的学生会管理人员，负责监管如元旦晚会一类的大型活动。这个经历则教会了我如何与别人融洽地相处。

本人热爱运动与音乐，对于乒乓球和羽毛球比较擅长，曾经参加过交响乐团并在艺术家的梦想之地——维也纳金色大厅进行过演出。

希望通过我的这封自荐信，能使您对我有一个更全面的了解，我愿意以极大的热情与责任心投入到贵公司的发展建设中去。您的选择是我的期望，给我一次机会还您一份惊喜。
若承蒙赏识，请发邮件至123@163.com或打电话xxxxxxxx。

最后，衷心祝愿贵单位事业发达、蒸蒸日上！

求职人：XX

2010年2月17日

翻译要求：简约，而不简单。不一定要逐字逐句翻译，不要求用高深专业的词汇，但是要求把意思翻译到位...如有改动，请写出来。如有润色，感激不尽...
按照美式英语书信的格式要求翻译，谢谢...

80分悬赏+追分，请各位帮我一下！谢谢！
请不要给我机器翻译的答案...

Answer 1

首先，你第一个犯的错误就是那个Dear Boss。外国人是不说“亲爱的老板”的！应该用“Dear Whom This May Concern”，直译是“亲爱的与这个有关系的人”，虽然中文听的便扭，可是你要写的是地道的英文，而不是中国英文啊！

剩下的我也不多说了，因为自己比较懒，看了一下楼上别人的，觉得除了nancylne可能是自己写的，别的应该都是机器的。所以我在nancylne的基础上改吧（我中文不是很好，所以看你写的那么多中文字，说实话有点头晕~）

Dear Whom This May Concern,

Thank you for your precious time. Having been deeply impressed by the good image and the professional staff of your company, I am writing to you in the hope of joining this great team.

First of all, allow me to introduce myself. My name is…, and I am studying in…university, majoring in Human Resources Management.

Through the years of education, I have formed a good character and an outgoing personality. Besides, I am highly responsible and well-disciplined. Being a self-starter, I am willing to find a position that calls for inter-personal communication.

I am pragmatic and have grasped many practical skills such as Microsoft Word, Excel and Powerpoint, as well as the fundamentals of Adobe Photoshop. I am also extremely capable in photography.

As for work experience, I have been a music teacher for a year in teaching drums (爵士鼓) and through which I was able to express myself in another form while improving my communication skills.

In addition, for 2 years I have worked as a part of the management team in the student union of my university, duties included the organization of student parties and large festival events. Thanks to this, I was exposed to team work and have ever since been an effective yet efficient team member.

In terms of hobbies, I am an avid lover of music and sports. I do well in table tennis and badminton. I was also fortunate enough to have had the chance to perform inside the Musikverein (维也纳金色大厅) in Vienna as a part of a symphony orchestra.

I hope that through this brief introduction of myself, you are to better understand me, not just as a potential employee but also as a person with passion and responsibility. Which I believe will benefit greatly to the development and the future of your company.

If there are any questions, please feel free to contact me through email: 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxxx.

I hope to hear from you soon!

Yours Sincerely,
XX
Feb. 17, 2010

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好了，改好了。最后基本上都改过了（不信你对比一下），因为实在太中国化了。如果是给鬼佬看的话，绝对会有读起来不是很舒服的感觉。尤其是你最后的什么“蒸蒸日上”的，别嫌我烦啊，呵呵（不过我确实有一点），那个不需要说的。

因为他们在选择你的同时，你也在选择他们。所以是互相的。所以我就改成了“希望可以马上听到您的回复”。

P.S.维也纳金色大厅的英文名也给你搜索出来啦！

Answer 2

First of all, your company a good image and the quality of staff attracted me to cast the personal statement. At the same time, I sincerely thank you for a busy public to browse the material, I am eager to get your understanding and support. Are pleased to introduce you to myself. My name is XX, studied at the University of XX human resources professional.

I have always been subject to a good family, so I have a good accomplishment, as well as outward-looking character, so well-planned style of doing things, there is a strong sense of responsibility. Thus, in the eyes of others, I am easy to deal with people. So it is suitable for your company is going to require the exchange of positions with people. Because I am more focused on practice, and therefore the need for the life of the local practice have some learning. For example, in software, I would be very proficient in the use Word, Excel functions and the production of the vast majority of PPT, there are PS foundation.

This experience taught me was how to get along harmoniously with others. I love sports and music, for the better at table tennis and badminton, has been involved in orchestra and in the artist's dream land - Vienna's Golden Hall been performed.

In addition, I am good at photography. The number of working experience, I did a year music teacher, teaching others to learn from bass drums. This is the abstract art of using language to describe them, exercise their ability to communicate with others. Has also served as a two-year college student management personnel, responsible for the supervision, such as New Year's Day party a class of large-scale activities.

Hope that through my personal statement to this can make you I have a more complete understanding, I would like to with great enthusiasm and sense of responsibility into your company's development building. Your choice is my hope, give me a chance also you a surprise. If the courtesy of her, please send 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxx. Finally, I sincerely wish your organization has developed, flourishing! Job one: XX 2010 Nian 2 Yue 17 Ri

Answer 3

Dear Boss:

First of all, your company a good image and the quality of staff attracted me to cast the personal statement. At the same time, I sincerely thank you for a busy public to browse the material, I am eager to get your understanding and support.

Are pleased to introduce you to myself. My name is XX, studied at the University of XX human resources professional.

I have always been subject to a good family, so I have a good accomplishment, as well as outward-looking character, so well-planned style of doing things, there is a strong sense of responsibility. Thus, in the eyes of others, I am easy to deal with people. So it is suitable for your company is going to require the exchange of positions with people.
Because I am more focused on practice, and therefore the need for the life of the local practice have some learning. For example, in software, I would be very proficient in the use Word, Excel functions and the production of the vast majority of PPT, there are PS foundation. In addition, I am good at photography.

The number of working experience, I did a year music teacher, teaching others to learn from bass drums. This is the abstract art of using language to describe them, exercise their ability to communicate with others.
Has also served as a two-year college student management personnel, responsible for the supervision, such as New Year's Day party a class of large-scale activities. This experience taught me was how to get along harmoniously with others.

I love sports and music, for the better at table tennis and badminton, has been involved in orchestras and in the artist's dream land - Vienna's Golden Hall been performed.

Hope that through my personal statement to this can make you I have a more comprehensive understanding of, I am willing with great enthusiasm and sense of responsibility into your company's development building. Your choice is my hope, give me a chance also you a surprise.
If the courtesy of her, please send 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxx.

Finally, I sincerely wish your organization has developed, flourishing!

Job one: XX

February 17, 2010

Answer 4

Feb.17, 2010
Dear Boss,
Thanks for your precious time. Having been deeply impressed by the good image and the professional staff of your company, I am writing to you in the hope of joining the great team.
First of all, allow me to introduce myself.
My name is…, and I am studying in…university, majoring in Human Resource.
Through years of education, I have formed good characters and outgoing personality. Besides, I am highly responsible and well-disciplined. Being a self-starter , I am willing to find a position that calls for inter personal communication.
I am pragmatic and have grasped many practical skills like computer operation and photography.
As for working experience, I have been a music teacher for one year teaching jazz through which I can express myself in another form and better my communication skills as well.
In addition, I have been administrator in the student union for two years in my university, in charge of organising public activities like evening parties. And during my two-year work, I have learnt how to get on well with each other.
In terms of hobbies, I am a great lover of music and sports. I do well in pingpong and badminton. And I have performed in the Golden Grand Hall of Vienna as one member of a symphony.
At last, I hope that through this brief self-recommendation you would have a better understanding of me. I am eager to join you and do contribution to your company. If accepted, I would do my best and never let you down.
Please feel free to contact me at 123@163.com or …….

Wish your company prosperous and a promising future!

Your sincerely,
…….

Answer 5

First of all, your company good image quality with its staff to attract I vote that we introduce ourselves. At the same time, I sincerely thank you in a busy public viewing this material, I'm eager to hear from you.

Have the pleasure to introduce myself. My name is XX, XX of students who were University human resources professional.

I've well－trained tutors, please let me have educated and outgoing personality and be calculated, there is a strong sense of responsibility. Therefore, in others it seems that I easily in dealing with people. It is suitable for your company to do need to communicate with people.

Comparison of because I was focused on practice, therefore, need to practise life where considerable learning. For example, in software, I will be very skilled in the use of Word, Excel functionality and making most of the PPT, and PS. In addition, I am good at taking photographs.

As regards the working experience, I have done a year and a music teacher, taught learn drums. This is the abstract art described by words, the exercise of his own and other people.

Still University has since held a two-year students'union managers, is responsible for monitoring such as new year's Day party a class of the public. The experience you have taught me how to get along with others easily.

I love the movement and music, for comparison table tennis and badminton good at it, ever Symphony Orchestra and the land of the artist's dream : Had a Golden Hall in Vienna.

I hope that through my writethe, an unsolicited letter can make you a more comprehensive understanding youforever with great enthusiasm and sense of responsibility to your company's development and construction. Your choice is, give me a chance to have a pleasant surprise.

If it is generous, please send email to 123@163.com Or call Xxxxxxxx .

Finally, I sincerely wish you career developed, becomes more and more!