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帮我改下以下几句英文句子嘅文法错误好吗?(急,跪求了,20)

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仲有几句
可以帮埋我ma...? 1.The mankind should not be absorbed in gambling and money. 2.They should spend more time to acpany their family and friends. 3.It is because this story gives me pleasant surprise. 感谢了!!

An unbroken sequence of events of story should be in succession with error and correction:- Here is an attempt to wer in a trial:- (8)As we live in society
who can be honest? (6)The genuine good moral of mankind has disappeared. (7)People often cheat others by deception. (4)They cheat our money or rob other things. (2)Don't trust him that Daniel has moved up and down. (1)The most exciting part of the story is (about) the stranger. (5)(I am surprised by the honesty of his statements.) but I do trust him---otherwise he will dislike me and attack me. (3)As a conclusion:-The most important thing I have learnt from this book is we should not believe the remark of the stranger easily. ----If your posting didn't ask for unbroken sequence
then the response will be different. 2012-07-02 14:04:17 补充： (1)People who gamble should not be absorbed in (betting ) and (gambling). (2)They should spend more time to acpany/(be present with) their family and friends. (3)It is because (the) story gives me (a) pleasant surprise. ---pleasant can refer to anything which pleases you.
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1.The most exciting part of the story is (that) the stranger..... 2.Daniel did not move (anywhere). 3.The most important thing I have learnt from this book is (that) we should not believe (what) (the) stranger(s) (said) easily. 4.They may cheat (us) (for) our money or other thing(s). 5.Otherwise other people will dislike and attack me. 6.The pure heart(s) of mankind (have) disappeared. 7.People often cheat other people. 8.As we (are) in the society
who can be honest?
My suggestions: 1.The most exciting part of the story is the part about the stranger..... 2.Daniel did not move up or down. 3.The most important thing I have learnt from this book is we should not trust the remarks of the stranger without thinking . 4.They may cheat us of our money or valuables. 5.Otherwise some people will dislike me and (even worse) attack me. 6.The kindnes/ purity of mankind has disappeared. 7.People often cheat other people. 8.As we live in society
we hardly know who are honest and who are not.