请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误！谢谢！
请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误！谢谢！
This story reminds me one of my 【experiences】. Last month, I failed in 【an】exam, 【instead of letting myself down】, I paid 【more】 attention to 【the reasons of】my failure. 【I always get lessons from those failure experiences of my studying.】 【At last去掉】Finally, I 【improved myself and got suessful】 【in the end.去掉】
【I quite agree with the writer’s idea because I think what he said are reasonable】. Failure is what often happens in our life. 【The best way to treat it is facing them it】 directly instead of running away from the 【challenges】.
In my opinion, 【failure】 can be valuable and helpful to you, because it can help you understand yourself more clearly. If you can make use of the lessons from failure, and try again and again, suess will e to you sooner or later. As the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of suess.” “No pains, no gains.”
最后一段建议所有第二人称改成第一人称
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请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢
This story reminds me one of my 【experiences】. I had 【many difficulties】in learning English 【because I was born and raised in China 土生土长的】, and was 【especially poor】 in oral English. 【My clas *** ate always make fun of my mistakes】. However, I never 【give】 up. Instead I kept listening to the tape and practicing speaking 【English】 whenever I got a chance. As I expected, my English 【improved】 quickly, to my surprise, I even get an “A” in the oral English exam.
In my opinion, though life can be hard, we shouldn’t easily 【give up】 what we do. If we make up our minds, and try again and again, we will finally get the sunshine we want. As the saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves. Suess only belongs to those who have strong wills.”
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bee一般不用于进行时。
第二段的the use of，最好改为the usage of。你的作文很棒哦！呵呵
请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢1
回答完毕，哈哈哈，加分
你只放个图上来，而不把作文打进来，心不诚哦。这样别人很难给你改。我把几个主要错误列在下面了。如果你想要更进一步的改正，就需要把全文打进来。另外你要练一下手写字型(能够把字母连写的)。你写的字虽然看着漂亮，但是写起来慢，读时不好认，两边都费劲。
1. 你只看了一个电影，要用单数 a movie。
2. Watch a movie 是在家看电影，通常是在电视上看。现在也指线上看。到电影院看电影是 see a movie。我看你写的开头还以为你把朋友请到家里来了呢。
3. 讲故事的时候时态要一致，不要有时用过去时有时用现在时。when we get to the cinema应该是when we got to the cinema。
4. 电影院工作人员不是waitress，应该用the lady working there。
5. 她说完话结尾你忘了加引号。
6. a distance way应该是a distance away。
7. always ready应该是always be ready，有情态动词should时不要忘了谓语动词。
请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢2
As far as I am concerned, 【keeping pets should be forbidden】in the munity. The reasons【for this】are as follows. Firstly, 【harmful noise might be made by animals which】will 【disturb our】neighbors. Secondly, pets are likely to give【off [散发体味用give off]】 bad *** ell, which pollutes the surroundings. What's worse, 【sick pets】and 【some aggressive animals】are dangerous to people.
There is no denying that 【pets sometimes have a bad behavior of injuring people】. I think it's the high time for us to put an end to 【this】 trend. Although keeping pets 【still】 have many advantages, that is just one side of 【the】coin. If we e across 【any】 case mentioned above, at that time, 【I think rules should be made to regulate the pets owners at once.】In a world, 【去掉now】【measures】 have to be taken to 【discourage】 keeping pets in the munity.
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请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢3
As far as I am concerned, to live a healthy life, we should first pay much attention to a balanced diet.【去掉as we are what we eat】. 【Having】 regular 【exercises】 and 【getting】enough sleep are 【also important to our healthy bodies.】Besides, stress is absolutely an enemy of our health, we 【we need to know ways to relax ourselves in heavy workloads. [relax与所提及的stress是相对的解决方法，不要单纯简单地用get rid.]】
【In my point of view, the way my clas *** ates lived isn’t a healthy way for us to follow.】They often have some 【snacks during break time [课间用break time表示]】. What's worse, they 【always busy】 in 【studying till midnight.】 【They are lacking of sleep and physical exercises】. 【All above lead to their unhealthy bodies.】
As a senior student, I think it is 【not】 important 【but】 necessary for us to live a healthy life. So it is the high time for us to say no to 【those】 unhealthy ways of living. 【去掉And】I wish my schoolmates could understand the importance of good health and live a healthy life 【as soon as possible】.
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请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢w
提出我的看法：
1，第二行有两个the .重了，去掉一个
2，第五行，some shortings that disturb me a lot . shorting 后加s ，为复数，后面disturbs去掉s
3,develop my interests 前的to 可去掉
4，design ?我觉得用set up 更好
5，to go and relax 中的go and 去掉
6，The teachers will focus on teaching the students 中的the students 里的the 去掉
7，including the weekend 这句多余，去掉
8，个人认为第二段的结尾加上if we set up this kind of school 比较好，这样可以与第二段的开头遥相呼应
说真的，这篇文章总体感觉中式思维极强，我不敢有太大改动，只是按照你文章的思路进行“小改款”，呵呵呵
祝君好运！
我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢
1 in our dormitory maybe have some controversy，有语法错误，把in去掉，把maybe改为may
2 we can have a good rest and put our heart into study个人认为把put in to 改为concentrate one,mind on比较好 还是尽量不用heartS吧 3 I beliveve it is high time that we took some effective measures to solve this problem.在下认为这句用的很漂亮！4 A bright future is waiting for us when all the measures are taken seriously implementation.似乎后面应改为taken into serious implemention
