Question

请教大家一个英语改错问题

Mary works at a bank.She begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working on five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.Some people drive home.Some people take the train .Some people take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.She walks,and walks,and walks,or walks.Mary lives eight miles from the bank.She walks for three hour.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home.He eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the bed.Mary is tired.She is eighty-two year old.
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Answer 1

Mary works at a bank.She begin(此处加s) working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working on（改at） five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to(删to) home.Some people drive home.Some people take the train .Some people take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.She walks,and walks,and walks,or(改and) walks.Mary lives eight miles from the bank.She walks for three hour(加S).
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is （加at）home.He（这个算不算？） eats dinner.At ten o'clock she goes to the（删the） bed.Mary is tired.She is eighty-two year(加s) old.
我只找到这些，不好意思啦~