Question

这句英语语法有没有错误？

第一种译法：At the end of 2009, the Hong Kong Regulatory Authority issued the draft that the reports of the two places are equivalent and the listed companies will be allowed to disclose financial report under China’s Accounting Standards only.
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2009年末，香港监管机构发布了两地报告等效的征求意见稿，将允许两地上市公司今后可只披露中国会计准则财务报告
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下面这句呢？
第二种译法：At the end of 2009, the Hong Kong Regulatory Authority issued the draft which allow that the reports of the two places are equivalent and the listed companies can only disclose financial report under China’s Accounting Standards.
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第一种译法有问题吗？
第二种译法有问题吗？
请准确说一下第一种译法有没有错误？如果错了错在哪里？是同位语从句吗？

Answer 1

我认为第一个翻译好。。第二个翻译有个语法错误。。大概是你打错的。。

allows！！。。

其次，学过SAT（美国高考）应该知道语言要简洁。。明显一个从句

比从句套从句好。。所以我认为第一个句子好。

第一句是同位语从句。。

Answer 2

第二个翻译比较准确。

Answer 3

i think it's correct, no grammer wrongs . all these two ways are ok