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英语高手请进。在线等。。。好人来帮忙。谢谢！一定要高高手！纠正我翻译的错误指出

我是一名外汇经纪人，在一家投资公司工作。我的工作任务是处理外汇交易。我喜欢我的工作，并在工作中获得很多乐趣。
我的兴趣很广泛，其中一项就是英语。有空的时候我常常看一些欧美电影。这样可以帮助我提高英语水平，也可以从中学到很多知识。我最喜欢的影片之一是蝴蝶效应。
我觉得看欧美电影对英语的提高帮助非常大。
谢谢老师，我的回答完毕。

Im a forex agent，work in a invest company,my work is that deal with forex exchange.i like my work and have a lot of fun with it.
I have a lot of hobbies,one of all is English.when im free I often watch western movies.it can help me improve my English,also I can learn many knowledge from it.my favorate movie is betterfly effect.
I think watching western movies can help me stupy English better.
That’s my answer.thank you.
不好意思啊，我脑子疼，我都是随便翻译的。根本就没怎么准备。所以来请教高高手了。真的，身体有点不舒服呢。

1L你是不是纯捣乱的？要死是怎么的？欠骂！

Answer 1

有些语法错误，是口头陈述的吗？简单改一下你的错误语法吧
I'm a forex agent, working in an invest company. My job is to deal with forex exchange. I like my job and have a lot of fun with it.
I have a lot of hobbies, one of which is Englsih. I often watch English movies at spare time. It can help to improve my English and enlarge my knowledge. My favorate movie is Betterfly Effect.
I suggest that watching English movies will help a lot in English learning.
That's my answer. Thank you.

Answer 2

Im a forex agent，work in a invest company,my work is deal with forex exchange.i like my work and have a lot of fun with it.
I have a lot of hobbies,one of all is English.when im free I often watch western movies.it can help me improve my English, I alsocan learn many knowledge from it.my favorate movie is betterfly effect.
I think watching western movies can help me stupy English better.
That’s my answer.thank you.

Answer 3

knowledge 改为 things 比较好 这样听起来顺口而且一般比较口语化的都是这样 ，建议楼主自己多多检查