Question

200分求高手翻译(2)~

自我介绍一篇,要求语言流畅,行文符合英语逻辑.
本人学业繁忙,时间有限,特请教各位英语达人.
因为字数比较多,我把全文分成2段,各200分,诚意如此,还望大家不吝赐教~
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为此，我对自己的职业生涯和目标进行了重新修正，使我更加确信今后要在金融领域（MFE－MASTER IN FINANCE & ECNOMICS）发展并希望有所成就，希望成长为一名出色的行业运作专家或管理者。

我深知生命的价值和时间的宝贵，我力求要在精力充沛的青年时期能够多学点知识和本领。为此，我放弃了众人所盼，令人难舍的中山大学 4年制漫长的商务英语课程来到了Macquarie，计划用两年的时间完成 3年制高强度的会计课程。截止目前，我已经以 GPA 3.86（BASED ON 4.0 SCALE） 的优异成绩完成了大二前规定的所有课程。我已申请并获校方准许，同意本学期选修富有挑战性的大三一年期所有课程，我希望能通过自己的努力完成我本科最后一学期的学习目标。

我的中长期（5~10年）目标和计划：

1ST STEP：利用2年时间完成 MQ ACC 3年制本科的全部课程，（2008年秋季～2010年秋季）；澳洲
- 我认为会计是一切金融活动的基础，它体现的是有约束力的原则和规范集。通过会计专业的学习，
我要首先打好坚实的金融基础，培养自己识别、判断和预测企业财务状况及风险的能力；

2ND STEP：利用 1年时间完成 MFE 的全部课程（2010年秋季～2011年秋季）; 英国
- 相信贵校的 MFE（MSc in Financial Economics）课程可以帮助且使我获得投资/融资、M&A等金融
活动方面的基础知识与技能，为从事资本运作奠定基础。

3TH STEP：在3年之内完成 MBA 全部课程（2011年秋季～2014年秋季）; 美国
- 先回国工作1～2年积累工作经验再报考 MBA（FULL TIME）
- 通过 MBA 课程的学习，使自己掌握国际最新企业经营与管理理念，有能力更好地为所服务企业的
生存与发展出谋划策。

我的个性除了自信，再就是喜欢挑战性的工作，我希望在我的人生旅途中，能够有机会并在贵校留下足迹。

Answer 1

不知不觉，一个有趣的寒假便过去了。我们迎来了新的一学期——七年级下学期！！
1． 每天早上6：20起床，用10分钟将头天要背的课文温习1—2遍，7：00从家出发。
2． 上课认真听讲，积极发言，做好笔记。
3． 认真仔细写作业，不对答案，认真对待每一门课。
4． 写完作业后，复第二天上课的内容。
5． 对于副课及历史、地理、生物每学完一习当天的内容并预习课后，要用心去作自己买的课外习题书，作的时候要做到不抄答案，不看书，凭借自己所学的去做。如果遇到不会的题，也不能马上看答案或看书，要等到全部做完后，再去找答案，并及时背过。
6． 对于主课及数学（代数、几何）、语文、英语、物理和政治，每学完一单元或一课时，要对比《优化设计》的讲解部分进行进一步的加深理解和巩固，并要做练习题，写时仍不能抄答案，写完后可交老师批改或对照答案，找出错误及时纠正。
7． 遇到不懂得要及时问老师或问同学，弄明白。
8． 每天晚上听30分钟英语，训练自己的听力。
9.空闲时间多看课外书，每天记1～2条好词佳句。
10.前一天晚上认真预习。多做深、精的题目，拓展思维。
11.每天坚持朗读外语，养成良好的语感。认真识记单词。认真复习和预习，重点掌握语法，句型。注意活学活用。
12. 给自己立一个目标，把所有课程学习巩固好,达到能考个好高中的成绩.
如果某一天没有达到的情况下，后面一定要补上．

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Answer 2

To this end, I own career and goals of the re-amended to make me more confident in the future in the financial sector (MFE-MASTER IN FINANCE & ECNOMICS) to develop and hope to see success, want to grow into a great operation of the industry experts or managers.

I know the value of life and time precious, I have sought to energetic youth to studying more knowledge and skills. To this end, I gave up hope of all people, it is Nanshe Sun Yat-sen 4-year long business English courses came to Macquarie, plans to complete two years of high-intensity three-year accounting courses. Up to now, I have to GPA 3.86 (BASED ON 4.0 SCALE) completed its second year of outstanding results in all required courses before. I have applied for and was the school permission, agree that this semester elective challenging period of the great 2031 all the courses, I hope that through their own efforts to finish my last semester of undergraduate learning goals.

My long-term (5 ~ 10 years) goals and plans:

1ST STEP: the use of two years to complete the MQ ACC 3-year undergraduate full course (2008 Fall ~ 2010 Fall); Australia
- I think that accounting is the foundation of all financial activities, which reflects a binding set of principles and norms. Study by the accounting profession,
I would first like to lay a solid financial foundation and develop its own identify, determine and predict corporate financial position and risks;

2ND STEP: the use of a year to complete a full course of MFE (2010 ~ 2011 autumn autumn); United Kingdom
- I believe your school's MFE (MSc in Financial Economics) courses can help and enable me to get investment / finance, M & A and other financial
Activities, the basic knowledge and skills, in order to lay the foundation for engaging in capital operation.

3TH STEP: In the three years to complete a full course of MBA (2011 Fall ~ Fall 2014); United States
- Before returning to work 1 to 2 years work experience and then apply for MBA (FULL TIME)
- Through the MBA course of study, so that their grasp of the latest international business and management concepts and ability to better serve businesses
Survival and development of advice and suggestions.

In addition to self-confidence my personality and play like challenging work, I hope in my life journey, to have the opportunity to leave footprints in your school. 上面没用的

Answer 3

To this end, I own career and goals of the re-amended to make me more confident in the future in the financial sector (MFE-MASTER IN
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FINANCE & ECNOMICS) to develop and hope to see success, want to grow into a great operation of the industry experts or managers.

I know the value of life and time precious, I have sought to energetic youth to studying more knowledge and skills. To this end, I gave up hope of all people, it is Nanshe Sun Yat-sen 4-year long business English courses came to Macquarie, plans to complete two years of high-intensity three-year accounting courses. Up to now, I have to GPA 3.86 (BASED ON 4.0 SCALE) completed its second year of outstanding results in all required courses before. I have applied for and was the school permission, agree that this semester elective challenging period of the great 2031 all the courses, I hope that through their own efforts to finish my last semester of undergraduate learning goals.

My long-term (5 ~ 10 years) goals and plans:

1ST STEP: the use of two years to complete the MQ ACC 3-year undergraduate full course (2008 Fall ~ 2010 Fall); Australia
- I think that accounting is the foundation of all financial activities, which reflects a binding set of principles and norms. Study by the accounting profession,
I would first like to lay a solid financial foundation and develop its own identify, determine and predict corporate financial position and risks;

2ND STEP: the use of a year to complete a full course of MFE (2010 ~ 2011 autumn autumn); United Kingdom
- I believe your school's MFE (MSc in Financial Economics) courses can help and enable me to get investment / finance, M & A and other financial
Activities, the basic knowledge and skills, in order to lay the foundation for engaging in capital operation.

3TH STEP: In the three years to complete a full course of MBA (2011 Fall ~ Fall 2014); United States
- Before returning to work 1 to 2 years work experience and then apply for MBA (FULL TIME)
- Through the MBA course of study, so that their grasp of the latest international business and management concepts and ability to better serve businesses
Survival and development of advice and suggestions.

In addition to self-confidence my personality and play like challenging work, I hope in my life journey, to have the opportunity to leave footprints in your school. .

Answer 4

To this end, I own career and goals of the re-amended to make me more confident in the future in the financial sector (MFE-MASTER IN FINANCE & ECNOMICS) to develop and hope to see success, want to grow into a great operation of the industry experts or managers.

I know the value of life and time precious, I have sought to energetic youth to studying more knowledge and skills. To this end, I gave up hope of all people, it is Nanshe Sun Yat-sen 4-year long business English courses came to Macquarie, plans to complete two years of high-intensity three-year accounting courses. Up to now, I have to GPA 3.86 (BASED ON 4.0 SCALE) completed its second year of outstanding results in all required courses before. I have applied for and was the school permission, agree that this semester elective challenging period of the great 2031 all the courses, I hope that through their own efforts to finish my last semester of undergraduate learning goals.

My long-term (5 ~ 10 years) goals and plans:

1ST STEP: the use of two years to complete the MQ ACC 3-year undergraduate full course (2008 Fall ~ 2010 Fall); Australia
- I think that accounting is the foundation of all financial activities, which reflects a binding set of principles and norms. Study by the accounting profession,
I would first like to lay a solid financial foundation and develop its own identify, determine and predict corporate financial position and risks;

2ND STEP: the use of a year to complete a full course of MFE (2010 ~ 2011 autumn autumn); United Kingdom
- I believe your school's MFE (MSc in Financial Economics) courses can help and enable me to get investment / finance, M & A and other financial
Activities, the basic knowledge and skills, in order to lay the foundation for engaging in capital operation.

3TH STEP: In the three years to complete a full course of MBA (2011 Fall ~ Fall 2014); United States
- Before returning to work 1 to 2 years work experience and then apply for MBA (FULL TIME)
- Through the MBA course of study, so that their grasp of the latest international business and management concepts and ability to better serve businesses
Survival and development of advice and suggestions.

In addition to self-confidence my personality and play like challenging work, I hope in my life journey, to have the opportunity to leave footprints in your school.

Answer 5

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To this end, I own career and goals of the re-amended to make me more confident in the future in the financial sector (MFE-MASTER IN FINANCE & ECNOMICS) to develop and hope to see success, want to grow into a great operation of the industry experts or managers.

I know the value of life and time precious, I have sought to energetic youth to studying more knowledge and skills. To this end, I gave up hope of all people, it is Nanshe Sun Yat-sen 4-year long business English courses came to Macquarie, plans to complete two years of high-intensity three-year accounting courses. Up to now, I have to GPA 3.86 (BASED ON 4.0 SCALE) completed its second year of outstanding results in all required courses before. I have applied for and was the school permission, agree that this semester elective challenging period of the great 2031 all the courses, I hope that through their own efforts to finish my last semester of undergraduate learning goals.

My long-term (5 ~ 10 years) goals and plans:

1ST STEP: the use of two years to complete the MQ ACC 3-year undergraduate full course (2008 Fall ~ 2010 Fall); Australia
- I think that accounting is the foundation of all financial activities, which reflects a binding set of principles and norms. Study by the accounting profession,
I would first like to lay a solid financial foundation and develop its own identify, determine and predict corporate financial position and risks;

2ND STEP: the use of a year to complete a full course of MFE (2010 ~ 2011 autumn autumn); United Kingdom
- I believe your school's MFE (MSc in Financial Economics) courses can help and enable me to get investment / finance, M & A and other financial
Activities, the basic knowledge and skills, in order to lay the foundation for engaging in capital operation.

3TH STEP: In the three years to complete a full course of MBA (2011 Fall ~ Fall 2014); United States
- Before returning to work 1 to 2 years work experience and then apply for MBA (FULL TIME)
- Through the MBA course of study, so that their grasp of the latest international business and management concepts and ability to better serve businesses
Survival and development of advice and suggestions.

In addition to self-confidence my personality and play like challenging work, I hope in my life journey, to have the opportunity to leave footprints in your school.